My Poems
I started writing my own poems. I would like to know what you think about them
Does it hurt to be beautiful?
I would guess that you would know.
Jaws drop as you enter the room,
people wish they could be you.
Does it hurt to be amazing?
People faint to your smile.
They wish to be noticed by you,
they wish to be with you.
Doesn't it hurt to be you?
No? It will very soon.
Your skin will crinkle and fade
You teeth will rok and crack
You hair will gray and die
And everyone around you will forget your name.
It might not hurt now.
But, don't worry darling.
I will soon.
I would guess that you would know.
Jaws drop as you enter the room,
people wish they could be you.
Does it hurt to be amazing?
People faint to your smile.
They wish to be noticed by you,
they wish to be with you.
Doesn't it hurt to be you?
No? It will very soon.
Your skin will crinkle and fade
You teeth will rok and crack
You hair will gray and die
And everyone around you will forget your name.
It might not hurt now.
But, don't worry darling.
I will soon.
5 Comments
This is good u should write more
AMAZINGG!!! that could be a short rap 2.. just sayin
more please!
Aww I like these. :) Google DAYNA MORTIMORE I recently got one of my poems published online. (Last Lullaby) :D
Wow. You're a really good poet. You've got some spelling issues, which seem to be the result of keyboard malfunctions. :)