You promise * father - daughter poem*
When I was a little girl
You used to carry me
On top of ur shoulders
I was scared that you might drop me
You promised that you wouldn't
You said ull always catch me when I fall
Whatever happen to those promises
Im falling but where are you to catch me
Why did you promise me
Something you knew you couldnt keep
You used to carry me
On top of ur shoulders
I was scared that you might drop me
You promised that you wouldn't
You said ull always catch me when I fall
Whatever happen to those promises
Im falling but where are you to catch me
Why did you promise me
Something you knew you couldnt keep
10 Comments
This is so sad!! :(
Aww nice poem loved it ... good job dont worry mabye ur father wants to catch he might be far or dont knwo how to catch u .. mabye he wanst to show his love to u but he dont know how give him time
SOO GOOD :)
omg, I loved it!!!!!!!! :)
Aww this is really nice!
I. LOVED. IT.
:'(
Sad but a nice poem
aww! love it
wow, that wuz really sad =((( but you seriously have a gift 4 poetry, even tho
it wuz short it wuz really good.
sorry i like to say wuz a lot xD