How Can A Guy Be So Amazing?(A Darren Criss Love Story)
Ef you itouch. Anyways. I'll be doing this story with alliipotter if your not her friend, become hers(: I will probably have numerous mistakes. Please excuse them considering I'm writing this on my itouch(that sucks) X( if you have any friends that love Darren Criss, have them read this! If you have good ideas tell me or Alli(: if we write any inside jokes, comment or message whoever wrote it to explain because it may or may not have anything to actually do with the story(: thanks(: -Cynthia
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ok....im just gonna keep going in her POV even though it thats not what we planned but it makes more sense to me and it gets Darren in quicker(; Once again, some true, some not. thanks(: ♥Alli
by Darren_ILoveYou
ok....im just gonna keep going in her POV even though it thats not what we planned but it makes more sense to me and it gets Darren in quicker(; Once again, some true, some not. thanks(: ♥Alli
by Darren_ILoveYou
Chapter 1
this is pretty much all true&some made up stuff so its interesting(: hopefully itll get better after this this is pretty much background...and the second time I've written it >:( grrr itouch
"CYNTHIA!!!" it was my mom. I didn't want to wake up yet though.
"Mehhhdjajdjfognzga. It's only..." I rolled over and looked up at the clock.
"7:45 too early for the summer."
"but it's your birthday!" countered my mom.
"Even more of a reason for me to be able to sleep in...." I said. But of course not pound enough for her to hear. As I was walking downstairs I saw my little brother and sister sleeping peacefully in their room. I slowed down a bit so I could to unnoticed as I threw one of their toys at Grant's head. He didn't even notice.
"Here's some chocolate chip pan....." my dad didn't finish before he fell asleep in his pancakes. I looked at him for a moment then went to eating my breakfast.
"so what are we doing today?" I asked my mother who always knew exactly what we were doing at every moment of every day.
"Nothing until 3 when we have to pick up Alli for the Angel's game." Oh yes! We had the game today. Not only was I going with Alli- my best friend who I liked. But of course no one could know that because no one knew I was gay. And I couldn't tell her because it would creep her out. So I was the only one who knew for sure. Except possibly another one of my friends who says I'm a lesbian everyday. God knows if he's kidding or not. But I was also excited to go because sometime we got to go down right next to the field before games and get any players who will sign things to sign them. I ate my breakfast and then went right back upstairs to sleep.
I woke up at 2 to the Little Mermaid playing at full blast in the next room over. "KATIE TURN IT OFF!"
"I'M NOT KATIE!!!"
"GRANT STOP BEING A GIRL! I'm trying to sleep grantie. Can you pleeeeeease turn it down? I'll never hug you again....." I heard a pause in the next room over.
"No that's ok!" I could just hear him smiling evilly.
"Gahh I hate this kid! Why do all the softball girls think he's amazing??" I meant for that to be a rhetoical question.
"Because he's just the cutest little boy in the world!" said my mom.
"Really? I have to get that everyday from my friends and now from you too? I'm telling you he's evil."
"He's not evil. Now get up and get ready." So I put on my favorite shirt(a Mike Napoli jersey) and a red bow(:.
We got to the game and apparantly had really sucky seats because it was with some people or something. I dont know.
"Whose your favorite player Al?" I asked her.
"Well....my last favorite player died so...." She looked around at her 9 choices out warming up on the field. "THAT GUY!! He looks amazing."
"Okay....sure."
A ball was hit to the left fielder. "GO HOME TERRORIST!"
I looked at her for a moment before questioning.
"I just think he looks like a terrorist...." she said.
"You are the weirdest person I've ever met."
"Okay. Obviously you havent seen A Very Potter Musical. Otherwise, you'd know that line."
"No, I havent seen it....we'll have to watch it when we get home."
"YES! You'll fall in love with Darren Criss and Joey Richter! They are amazing!! And have the same kind of humor you do..." She got lost in thought just thinking about these people. Yeah....i'll fall in love with them....I thought.
I went through the whole game listening to her quoting this "AVPM". And with every quote I realized I NEEDED to see this. It sounded incredibly funny and for the first time ever I wantedd the baseball game to be over.
We watched the entire musical before my mom came into my room telling me that it was 1 in the morning and she could hear us laughing in her room across the hall. We told her we'd go to bed, then stayed up another 2 hours to watch the sequel.
"Isn't Darren the most amazing actor ever??" She asked me.
"Totally!!" I responded.
"Isn't he cute," another glazed look.
"totally......" I resposed again with a lot less enthusiasm.
She could tell something was wrong but knew not to push it. I wanted to tell her everything but I didn't want her to be scared to hang out with me or anything. But the more I thought about it, the more I realized......I actually was falling in love with Darren Criss. No. He's famous. I have no shot anyways, obviously. But he was absolutely incredible with his gorgeous curly hair, and deep brown eyes.....NO! I wasn't falling in love with him. But really, how amazing does a guy have to be to make a lesbian fall in love with him?
~~~~good? no? keep going? stop? make them longer? shorter? let Alli try and watch her write 7,000,000,000 times better than me?(; ideas, ideas, IDEAS(like how we meet him??) PLEASE!!!(: message meee!! Or better, Alli cuz shes writing the next part.(if you still dont know this person im referencing, username up in the intro) i neeeed to know! cuz if you dont like it/wont read it, i dont want to waste my time writing it(: THANKS ~~~~Cynthia♥♥
"Mehhhdjajdjfognzga. It's only..." I rolled over and looked up at the clock.
"7:45 too early for the summer."
"but it's your birthday!" countered my mom.
"Even more of a reason for me to be able to sleep in...." I said. But of course not pound enough for her to hear. As I was walking downstairs I saw my little brother and sister sleeping peacefully in their room. I slowed down a bit so I could to unnoticed as I threw one of their toys at Grant's head. He didn't even notice.
"Here's some chocolate chip pan....." my dad didn't finish before he fell asleep in his pancakes. I looked at him for a moment then went to eating my breakfast.
"so what are we doing today?" I asked my mother who always knew exactly what we were doing at every moment of every day.
"Nothing until 3 when we have to pick up Alli for the Angel's game." Oh yes! We had the game today. Not only was I going with Alli- my best friend who I liked. But of course no one could know that because no one knew I was gay. And I couldn't tell her because it would creep her out. So I was the only one who knew for sure. Except possibly another one of my friends who says I'm a lesbian everyday. God knows if he's kidding or not. But I was also excited to go because sometime we got to go down right next to the field before games and get any players who will sign things to sign them. I ate my breakfast and then went right back upstairs to sleep.
I woke up at 2 to the Little Mermaid playing at full blast in the next room over. "KATIE TURN IT OFF!"
"I'M NOT KATIE!!!"
"GRANT STOP BEING A GIRL! I'm trying to sleep grantie. Can you pleeeeeease turn it down? I'll never hug you again....." I heard a pause in the next room over.
"No that's ok!" I could just hear him smiling evilly.
"Gahh I hate this kid! Why do all the softball girls think he's amazing??" I meant for that to be a rhetoical question.
"Because he's just the cutest little boy in the world!" said my mom.
"Really? I have to get that everyday from my friends and now from you too? I'm telling you he's evil."
"He's not evil. Now get up and get ready." So I put on my favorite shirt(a Mike Napoli jersey) and a red bow(:.
We got to the game and apparantly had really sucky seats because it was with some people or something. I dont know.
"Whose your favorite player Al?" I asked her.
"Well....my last favorite player died so...." She looked around at her 9 choices out warming up on the field. "THAT GUY!! He looks amazing."
"Okay....sure."
A ball was hit to the left fielder. "GO HOME TERRORIST!"
I looked at her for a moment before questioning.
"I just think he looks like a terrorist...." she said.
"You are the weirdest person I've ever met."
"Okay. Obviously you havent seen A Very Potter Musical. Otherwise, you'd know that line."
"No, I havent seen it....we'll have to watch it when we get home."
"YES! You'll fall in love with Darren Criss and Joey Richter! They are amazing!! And have the same kind of humor you do..." She got lost in thought just thinking about these people. Yeah....i'll fall in love with them....I thought.
I went through the whole game listening to her quoting this "AVPM". And with every quote I realized I NEEDED to see this. It sounded incredibly funny and for the first time ever I wantedd the baseball game to be over.
We watched the entire musical before my mom came into my room telling me that it was 1 in the morning and she could hear us laughing in her room across the hall. We told her we'd go to bed, then stayed up another 2 hours to watch the sequel.
"Isn't Darren the most amazing actor ever??" She asked me.
"Totally!!" I responded.
"Isn't he cute," another glazed look.
"totally......" I resposed again with a lot less enthusiasm.
She could tell something was wrong but knew not to push it. I wanted to tell her everything but I didn't want her to be scared to hang out with me or anything. But the more I thought about it, the more I realized......I actually was falling in love with Darren Criss. No. He's famous. I have no shot anyways, obviously. But he was absolutely incredible with his gorgeous curly hair, and deep brown eyes.....NO! I wasn't falling in love with him. But really, how amazing does a guy have to be to make a lesbian fall in love with him?
~~~~good? no? keep going? stop? make them longer? shorter? let Alli try and watch her write 7,000,000,000 times better than me?(; ideas, ideas, IDEAS(like how we meet him??) PLEASE!!!(: message meee!! Or better, Alli cuz shes writing the next part.(if you still dont know this person im referencing, username up in the intro) i neeeed to know! cuz if you dont like it/wont read it, i dont want to waste my time writing it(: THANKS ~~~~Cynthia♥♥



25 Comments
ah. good times. oh that game was fun(: your a great writer!
OoooOooh Darren Criss!!!
This is good. XD I can't wait to read more.
OHHHH I CANT WAIT TILL DARREN CRISS COMES INTO THE STORY!!! NEXT PLEASE!!!
KEEP GOING!!!!!!!! I freakin' LOVE Darren and EVERYONE falls in love with him. He's supermegafoxyawesomehot and totally awesome and I'm not going to go on:) NEXT!
agreed(: haha thanks everyone(:
Love the story so far!! nxt plz!! :D
Next:)
Some mistakes, but other than that, pretty good.
like what?
yeah what mistakes??
Spelling, minor grammar mistakes... The usual stuff that gets people on here.
Can't wait for more. Keep an eye on your grammar, though
NEXTTTTTTT!!!!! I don't play softball, but my friend, who's anti-Glee and anti-StarKid does. I think you guys got me a way to convert her;) Thank you! :D
I just had her read it and she saysssss: LOVE IT! Keep writing!
haha yes! thanks(: