a poem and a URGENT note...(poem is called wonderland)
okay soo i was thinking should i make a story about Alice in wonderland from Alice's point of view?it would be a little dark and twisted but i already have some ideas and it sounds exciting.there would be romance between the mad hatter and her and war but please tell me if i should write it!!
also read my poem down below PLEASE
Chapter 1
wonderland
into wonderland i travel
here the present past unraveled
here the words are always backwards
here theres only ever blackbirds
food that makes you shrink in size
till your no smaller than your eyes
bandersnatches with razor claws
jabberwockys with vicious maws
rabbits dressed in colored vests
queens with no time for any rests
red card men with pointed spears
long tea tables full of cheeers
mad men who make hats and more
flowers that speak and loudly roar
twins that like to spin multiple rhymes
enough jam to last many lifetimes!
dont forget the half moon cat
or the small little fuzzy tea rat!
come with me to this strange land
come with me join my little band
join the hatter and the cat
join the rabbit and the rat
you must know me im quite a actor
my name known her in the ever after,
is Alice.....



6 Comments
cool!
i really would like if you created that story it sounds interesting and LOVED the poem!
i loved it
No story hater is like 40 and alice is 18
i was going to make them a year or two diffrent but ok
amazing!!
and yeah!