Wonderland (alice in wonderland twisted)
my alice in wonderland story.... i just thought of some random idea for this story.i really like Lewis Carrol and her stories and i wanted to do a story with a twist.alice is much older and its not just a child's story anymore.if you dont know the creatures in this story then read the books or watch the movie.( just so you know the mad hatter is not way older then her he is like two years older then her in my story.)
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Chapter 1
The frumious bandesnatch
the clouds shifted in the sky overhead.the trees towering to great heights rose above her head.the sky was a deep purple the likes of never seen before in the mundane world.th scent of a rich sweet flower lingered in the air.the sound were barley there.the brush of a birds wing against the air.the laughing trickle of a nearby stream.the soft whoosh sound of the breeze in the trees.but other then that it was eerily quiet.to quiet.
she carefully switched her position on the forest floor.the leaves under her feet barely rustling as she stretched her aching muscles.the blue dress around her slithered like silk across her skin.she pushed back a lock of blonde hair from out of her face and peered back out into the bushes at the bandersnatch as it scuffled around meters away from her.
she had sat her for hours.the bandersnatch had still not caughten her and she was getting tired and cold.she knew if she moved it would notice but she couldn't wait any longer.she warily stood from her crouch glad that the bushes obscured her.a branch snapped under her foot and the bandersnatch's head snapped up its ears swiveling to her.
she froze her muscles tensed under her.she felt the cold metal of the dagger press into her thigh.it was to late.she had to go.not skipping a beat she dove through the trees.she waited for the crashing of the huge creature behind her but their was only silence.silence in this world meant danger.she had learned this over her past visits here but now she was unsafe.
her senses on hyper drive she crouched.a thunderous roar shook the trees around her and she glanced up in time to see the monstrous white pelt mangled with scars flash above her head.merciless eyes stared down at her as if in slow motion.the gaping pink saber lined mouth closed on air as she rolled away.the bandersnatch roared in frustration and circled her.she stood stock still watching the huge monster.its spotted coat bristled with rage.
then a sharp whistle broke their silence.the beasts head shot up.its stocky muscular legs dug into the ground as it turned sharply loping into the trees. Alice collapsed to the ground exhausted.the world seemed to spin but she knew she couldn't stay here.it wasn't safe.tiredly she stood and walked slowly through the trees till she reached a white picket fence.
she opened the gate and walked over to the lone table covered in tea dishes.slumping in the chair she threw up her legs on the table."Alice."said a voice behind her.she didn't jump.she was used to it"yes hatter."she said annoyed that he was interrupting her rest.she closed her eyes once more as the man dressed in mismatched clothes walked around her.
hi shocking green eyes were even more contrasted with his fiery orange hair.his tall top hat sat crookedly on his head.he lifted a cup of tea off the table.brushing dirt off the table from Alice's shoes he sat down next to her sipping his tea.
"why was the bandersnatch chasing you again?"he said trying to scoff her.she flicked open one pristine blue eye."because it doesn't know how to keep its squashed hairy face out of peoples business."she growled and closed her eye."Alice"he repeated his voice getting edgier.she didn't open her eyes this time."i was trying to spy on the red queen."she muttered.he sighed and leaned back in his chair."i told you to leave that to the others."he warned.she laughed.he couldn't help but grin himself.the others could barely get inside the castle gates let alone get in AND spy on the queen.
a small form flitted at the end of the table and then it jumped on the table its fur shifting colors in the evening light.it grinned from ear to ear as it noticed Alice laying in the chair."hello Cheshire cat,would you like some tea?" said the mad hatter raising his glass."no thank you but if you dont mind the queen needs you immediately."said the cat.this made Alice jump up out of her chair."why does she need us immediately."said Alice emphasizing the last word.
the cat didn't answer all it did was fade into the background until all you could see was its wide white smile which soon faded away to."you know its very hard to take him serious when hes always smiling like that dont you think Alice?"he said still looking at the spot the cat had once occupied.she ignored him and hurried towards the fence.the hatter hurried to catch up to her."must we leave immediately?"he said not wanting to have to walk all the way to the white queens castle.
alice turned to him stubbornness flaring in her.ever since the hatter had met Alice when she was but b=very young he was mesmerized by her.not just her soft pale skin or piercing blue eyes.nor her bleached blonde hair or the rose of her cheeks.it was that stubborn flare that kindled behind her eyes.ever since the girl had stumbled upon his tea party years ago he was fascinated.
"we MUST go hatter."she said and he groaned following after her into the thick wood.neithe noticed the dark bird watching them from high above their head.the red queen seeing what the bird was seeing back miles away in her castle fumed with anger but didnt dare order the bird out of the shadow making it stay after them following then as they hurried to her sisters castle.
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AUTHORS NOTE: im really nervous that people wont like this story because people on her will look at the title and be like "Alice in wonderland how stupid." and that annoys me.does every story on here have to be about jb , harry potter, or twilight.i mean seriously.im trying to change things so PLEASE comment and rate.show quibblo that a good story doesnt have to be about wizards or vampires and werewolves!
she carefully switched her position on the forest floor.the leaves under her feet barely rustling as she stretched her aching muscles.the blue dress around her slithered like silk across her skin.she pushed back a lock of blonde hair from out of her face and peered back out into the bushes at the bandersnatch as it scuffled around meters away from her.
she had sat her for hours.the bandersnatch had still not caughten her and she was getting tired and cold.she knew if she moved it would notice but she couldn't wait any longer.she warily stood from her crouch glad that the bushes obscured her.a branch snapped under her foot and the bandersnatch's head snapped up its ears swiveling to her.
she froze her muscles tensed under her.she felt the cold metal of the dagger press into her thigh.it was to late.she had to go.not skipping a beat she dove through the trees.she waited for the crashing of the huge creature behind her but their was only silence.silence in this world meant danger.she had learned this over her past visits here but now she was unsafe.
her senses on hyper drive she crouched.a thunderous roar shook the trees around her and she glanced up in time to see the monstrous white pelt mangled with scars flash above her head.merciless eyes stared down at her as if in slow motion.the gaping pink saber lined mouth closed on air as she rolled away.the bandersnatch roared in frustration and circled her.she stood stock still watching the huge monster.its spotted coat bristled with rage.
then a sharp whistle broke their silence.the beasts head shot up.its stocky muscular legs dug into the ground as it turned sharply loping into the trees. Alice collapsed to the ground exhausted.the world seemed to spin but she knew she couldn't stay here.it wasn't safe.tiredly she stood and walked slowly through the trees till she reached a white picket fence.
she opened the gate and walked over to the lone table covered in tea dishes.slumping in the chair she threw up her legs on the table."Alice."said a voice behind her.she didn't jump.she was used to it"yes hatter."she said annoyed that he was interrupting her rest.she closed her eyes once more as the man dressed in mismatched clothes walked around her.
hi shocking green eyes were even more contrasted with his fiery orange hair.his tall top hat sat crookedly on his head.he lifted a cup of tea off the table.brushing dirt off the table from Alice's shoes he sat down next to her sipping his tea.
"why was the bandersnatch chasing you again?"he said trying to scoff her.she flicked open one pristine blue eye."because it doesn't know how to keep its squashed hairy face out of peoples business."she growled and closed her eye."Alice"he repeated his voice getting edgier.she didn't open her eyes this time."i was trying to spy on the red queen."she muttered.he sighed and leaned back in his chair."i told you to leave that to the others."he warned.she laughed.he couldn't help but grin himself.the others could barely get inside the castle gates let alone get in AND spy on the queen.
a small form flitted at the end of the table and then it jumped on the table its fur shifting colors in the evening light.it grinned from ear to ear as it noticed Alice laying in the chair."hello Cheshire cat,would you like some tea?" said the mad hatter raising his glass."no thank you but if you dont mind the queen needs you immediately."said the cat.this made Alice jump up out of her chair."why does she need us immediately."said Alice emphasizing the last word.
the cat didn't answer all it did was fade into the background until all you could see was its wide white smile which soon faded away to."you know its very hard to take him serious when hes always smiling like that dont you think Alice?"he said still looking at the spot the cat had once occupied.she ignored him and hurried towards the fence.the hatter hurried to catch up to her."must we leave immediately?"he said not wanting to have to walk all the way to the white queens castle.
alice turned to him stubbornness flaring in her.ever since the hatter had met Alice when she was but b=very young he was mesmerized by her.not just her soft pale skin or piercing blue eyes.nor her bleached blonde hair or the rose of her cheeks.it was that stubborn flare that kindled behind her eyes.ever since the girl had stumbled upon his tea party years ago he was fascinated.
"we MUST go hatter."she said and he groaned following after her into the thick wood.neithe noticed the dark bird watching them from high above their head.the red queen seeing what the bird was seeing back miles away in her castle fumed with anger but didnt dare order the bird out of the shadow making it stay after them following then as they hurried to her sisters castle.
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AUTHORS NOTE: im really nervous that people wont like this story because people on her will look at the title and be like "Alice in wonderland how stupid." and that annoys me.does every story on here have to be about jb , harry potter, or twilight.i mean seriously.im trying to change things so PLEASE comment and rate.show quibblo that a good story doesnt have to be about wizards or vampires and werewolves!



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Jb is not a vampire or a werewolf or a wizard
true lol
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