Holding Tight
Hey!
Sorry for not logging on, but the last two times I tried, I got a virus from Quibblo (-_-)
I have lost interest in 'Seven', so a new story (this one) is taking it's place! It's about four boys (Dante, Anakin, Hayden, Lucas) who have a hard life but they keep themselves standing strong by holding tight (hence the title).
I hope you enjoy it!
FOREVER & ALWAYS,
TeamAlbusSeverusPotter
Chapter 1
Character Info
Before I start, I want to tell you how I am going to write the story itself. Each chapter will be one of the boys names' (daves me from thinking of chapter titles) and whoevers name that is, that chapter will be told from their perspective.
One more thing; I will not be giving out the background stories for the characters. You'll find out in due time.
Another thing is I used a BMI test to make sure the characters weren't stick thin, but thin (Just a random fact if anyone decides to comment on their weight and height).
Now, on to the info!
Dante Lerner
AGE - 17
HAIR - Black, short/cropped, choppily cut
EYE - Dark brown, narrow, cold
SKIN - Tan-pale
HEIGHT - 5'8"
WEIGHT - 135 lbs/pounds
PHYSIQUE - Ripped, fit, strong
NATIONALITY - American (from California)
PERSONALITY - Spiteful, sarcastic, laid-back, cunning, cynical, cowardly
Anakin Vaalen
AGE - 15
HAIR - Dirty blonde, shaggy, covers one eye
EYE - Light blue, humorous,
SKIN - Pale
HEIGHT - 5'4"
WEIGHT - 120 lbs/pounds
PHYSIQUE - Thin, small, fit
NATIONALITY - Russian-American (Mum from St. Petersburg, Dad and him from Illinois)
PERSONALITY - Funny, light-hearted, optimistic, hard on self, logical
Lucas Walker
AGE - 17
HAIR - Black, straight, electric blue highlights (NOT STREAKS), flops in front of left eye
EYE - Dark blue, wide, mischevious
SKIN - Very pale
HEIGHT - 5'10"
WEIGHT - 140 lbs/pounds
PHYSIQUE - Well built, fit, thin frame
NATIONALITY -French-Canadian (from Nova Scotia)
PERSONALITY - Wild, aggressive, mischevious, adventurous
Hayden Sordino
AGE - 16
HAIR - Dark brown, messy, falls in front of eyes/face
EYE - Green, warm, almond shaped
SKIN - Tan
HEIGHT - 6'0"
WEIGHT - 150 lbs/pounds
PHYSIQUE - Lanky, thin, fit
NATIONALITY - American (from New York)
PERSONALITY - Shy, smart, quick-thinking, brave, impulsive, anger issues
One more thing; I will not be giving out the background stories for the characters. You'll find out in due time.
Another thing is I used a BMI test to make sure the characters weren't stick thin, but thin (Just a random fact if anyone decides to comment on their weight and height).
Now, on to the info!
Dante Lerner
AGE - 17
HAIR - Black, short/cropped, choppily cut
EYE - Dark brown, narrow, cold
SKIN - Tan-pale
HEIGHT - 5'8"
WEIGHT - 135 lbs/pounds
PHYSIQUE - Ripped, fit, strong
NATIONALITY - American (from California)
PERSONALITY - Spiteful, sarcastic, laid-back, cunning, cynical, cowardly
Anakin Vaalen
AGE - 15
HAIR - Dirty blonde, shaggy, covers one eye
EYE - Light blue, humorous,
SKIN - Pale
HEIGHT - 5'4"
WEIGHT - 120 lbs/pounds
PHYSIQUE - Thin, small, fit
NATIONALITY - Russian-American (Mum from St. Petersburg, Dad and him from Illinois)
PERSONALITY - Funny, light-hearted, optimistic, hard on self, logical
Lucas Walker
AGE - 17
HAIR - Black, straight, electric blue highlights (NOT STREAKS), flops in front of left eye
EYE - Dark blue, wide, mischevious
SKIN - Very pale
HEIGHT - 5'10"
WEIGHT - 140 lbs/pounds
PHYSIQUE - Well built, fit, thin frame
NATIONALITY -French-Canadian (from Nova Scotia)
PERSONALITY - Wild, aggressive, mischevious, adventurous
Hayden Sordino
AGE - 16
HAIR - Dark brown, messy, falls in front of eyes/face
EYE - Green, warm, almond shaped
SKIN - Tan
HEIGHT - 6'0"
WEIGHT - 150 lbs/pounds
PHYSIQUE - Lanky, thin, fit
NATIONALITY - American (from New York)
PERSONALITY - Shy, smart, quick-thinking, brave, impulsive, anger issues



7 Comments
i wanna read the story....nice character details....
they all sound amazing! my fave would be Hayden Sordino.
write it then let me read it
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BFF
Good! I like it!
wow the first chapter is amasing!
Very deep...... I WANT MORE!!!!!! WOW! I've never heard a story from an emo's point of view,,,, its always been about an emo. Way to go!!!
awesome