life in the akatsuki(itachi love story)
okay well this is like the first time i have written a anime love story hope you like it. :)
btw itachi is 19 in this story.sorry if i get anything wrong feel free to correct me if i do
Chapter 1
life is not fair
Name: Nozomi (hope)
eyes: blue
hair:can be white black or red
age:19
demon in her: ten tailed wolf,name: Haroka (far away)
family was killed by the demon and older sister (Rin) joined the akatsuki.
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Name: Rin (cold)
age: 20
hair:blond
eyes: violet
hates her sister and is deidara's lover.
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CH.1 hate grows stronger (Nozomi's POV)
a new day running from people who are trying to kill me.i don't fit in anywhere i left the leaf because there is just way to much drama now on to the sand village.running as fast as i could i had to get there before night fall and i only have about a mile left.it gets darker and darker with every step i take.i was lost in my thoughts when i bumped into someone."sorry"isaid seeing 2 boys and a blond hair girl."it's fine i'm Temari. this is konkuro (spelling),and gaara."she said."i'm Nozomi"i said then i realized my hair was not hidding my curse mark to show i had a demon in me.'oh no!!!' i thought to my self.it was even darker out."hello little sis"i heard a voice behind me say.i turned around and dogged a kunai (spelling) just in time before it killed me."hello rin my cold hearted sister"i growled."ooo i am so scared"she mocked.then a guy with black hair and a sharingon came out of nowhere."Rin we are not here to kill her we came here to take her to Pein. remember"he sneered at her."fine then Itachi you can get her yourself"Rin said then disappeared.i looked to see that temari and them were gone.'no dam it'i thought.'see they leave you for death' Haroka said in my head.'shut the h3ll up'i told her.'fine'she said.before i knew what was happening Itachi tied me up and then i was pretty sure he cut me so many times on my arms that i blacked out from blood lost.
eyes: blue
hair:can be white black or red
age:19
demon in her: ten tailed wolf,name: Haroka (far away)
family was killed by the demon and older sister (Rin) joined the akatsuki.
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Name: Rin (cold)
age: 20
hair:blond
eyes: violet
hates her sister and is deidara's lover.
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CH.1 hate grows stronger (Nozomi's POV)
a new day running from people who are trying to kill me.i don't fit in anywhere i left the leaf because there is just way to much drama now on to the sand village.running as fast as i could i had to get there before night fall and i only have about a mile left.it gets darker and darker with every step i take.i was lost in my thoughts when i bumped into someone."sorry"isaid seeing 2 boys and a blond hair girl."it's fine i'm Temari. this is konkuro (spelling),and gaara."she said."i'm Nozomi"i said then i realized my hair was not hidding my curse mark to show i had a demon in me.'oh no!!!' i thought to my self.it was even darker out."hello little sis"i heard a voice behind me say.i turned around and dogged a kunai (spelling) just in time before it killed me."hello rin my cold hearted sister"i growled."ooo i am so scared"she mocked.then a guy with black hair and a sharingon came out of nowhere."Rin we are not here to kill her we came here to take her to Pein. remember"he sneered at her."fine then Itachi you can get her yourself"Rin said then disappeared.i looked to see that temari and them were gone.'no dam it'i thought.'see they leave you for death' Haroka said in my head.'shut the h3ll up'i told her.'fine'she said.before i knew what was happening Itachi tied me up and then i was pretty sure he cut me so many times on my arms that i blacked out from blood lost.



10 Comments
i know it is kinda cheesy
but it's still cool! :D
yeah this is good =3
More plz
i need help need some ideas
I have an idea! Nozomi wakes up and is being carried by Itachi, they just get to the Akatsuki's hideout, and Mozomi's taken and gets her wounds cleaned. Then is taken to Pein. Thats all I got cause I don't know why Pein wants her. lol it's just an idea, you could tweak it a bit or not even use it. Good luck!!
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was super-special-awesome!! even tho it was only the first chapter...
Ooo nyc story so far nxt plz eagerly awaiting nxt chapter :D
kool next pwease