Love at Hogwarts: Year 1 Part??: HARRY POTTER

"Ok So she put you on the quiddish (Sp?) Team ?" i said .
"Yup the yougest in a century" he said
then george and fred snuck up behind us.
"We just heard harry great job" they said i still couldnt really tell them apart yet. Then They kept saying things like,....."No ones died in a while but people diapear every once in a while"
"You better be careful then harry" i say and hermione comes up. Harry had this worried face
"Don't worry harry quiddish (SP?) is loads of fun" rons says reasuring harry
"But what if i mess up" he says
"Is that all your worried about i am more worried about you going into acoma then forgetting to catch the snitch" i say
"Come on harry I have something to show you...its about your father" hermione says. We all run down the hall and see all these quiddish trouphies and a plack with harry 's fathers name under it as a seeker.
" you never told us " ron says
" i never even knew" he says .
"We should head up to the dorm....." I say
We walk up to the stairs and then something starts moving
"Whats going on?~!" I say
"The stair cases they move remember?" hermione says
"Shoot where are we now!" ok so i was a little panniced but stair cases arent supposed to move!!!
"Come on heres a door" harry yells and i jump before it decieds to move again
"Crazy stair who designs crazy moving stairs" i say and look at hermione who shrugs.
we go through the door and i get this errie feeling we shouldn't be here
"Do you think its safe to be here" i say whispering
Theres all these cobwebs with frozen looking bodys everywhere then i see a cat.....professor flintchs (SP?) cat for that matter
"Hey isnt that -" ron trys to say before harry pulls us away
"Proffesor Flintchs cat that means he's here" he says we run up to a door but its locked
"Hurry think of something hes coming!" whispering and yelling at the same time.
Hermione uses this one spell to break the lock .....how does she memerize all these spells? We walk in and they lock the doors but i of course turn around and see this huge 3 headed dog
"GUys Guys there a a Huge Three headed dog in front of us" i say hitting them so they turn around We all just look at each other for a moment then scream
"AHHHHHHHH"
Then the dog wakes up the three of them get out but i'm just standing there in shock .....matter of fact my scar on my neck is burning which is werid. Then i feel someone grab my hand. It was harry pulling me behind the door.
We Push agaisnt the door trying to shut it but the dog wants out ...i had to think of some distraction what do dogs like i say then i figure it out
"Avis!" I say and all these birds fly out and the huge 3 headed dog chases them back into the door and harry and ron shut the doot
"Good thinking" harry says out of breath
"THanks"
All of us decied that we should had back to the dorms we walk up to the commin room and ron and hermione were yelling about something...
"Thanks for saving me harry i dont know what happened but the scar on my neck was burnning theres something in there" i say whispering to harry
"Your welcome" he says and smiles at me
I walk up the stairs and stand with hermione next to our dorm door
"now if you two dont mind i think me and Fiona here should go to bed before YOU two come up with some clever idea to get US KILLED" she says "Or worse EXPELLED" she slams the door and leaves me harry and ron behind her
"I better go with her" i Says " Good night"
"Night Fiona" they both say