No Need For Hell
i know this story might be a bit like twilight but in the end you'll see that it's REALLY different. this is a story I've been writing before i put it on QUIBBLO and my friends have started reading it and they really like it. i have one frend who asks me almost everyday if i wrote more. So please comment!
I never was part of this world. I could never fit in. I was too stange, too weird. Always the outcast, always the loner, even with my own knd.
But now ... I can die. I can finaly leave this world behind me and go to a place that people ... or things/monsters ... like me go after we die.
Hell.
I'm going there because I've done something terrible, too horrible for forgiveness. He'll never love me now. I know what i did. So now i have to pay the price. "I'm sorry," just isn't enough.
Cause if it was enough, then there'd be no need for hell ...
Right?
But now ... I can die. I can finaly leave this world behind me and go to a place that people ... or things/monsters ... like me go after we die.
Hell.
I'm going there because I've done something terrible, too horrible for forgiveness. He'll never love me now. I know what i did. So now i have to pay the price. "I'm sorry," just isn't enough.
Cause if it was enough, then there'd be no need for hell ...
Right?
7 Comments
that was awesome she didnt do anything and he just left what a weirdo right?
I guess but he's really a great guy. The story is kind of hard for me to explain.
next one plz
wow, this is old. its like, one of the first things i put on here.
ya but i looked at favorites on one of my friends and they had it
really? wow. cool.
ya so plz continue to write