Losing Me

Losing Me

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Kamilla is a normal 14 year old.
Except what happens to her is not normal...
Can one odd boy bring the old Kamilla back?

NOTE: The song 'I need a doctor' inspired me. So, if ya'll are wondering how I came up with this- just listen to the song :)

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Chapter 1

Kamilla's angel~

"Get her in a room...NOW!"
"C'mon, c'mon, c'mon..."
"SOMEONE FEEL HER PULSE!"
"She's still breathing!!!"
"HURRY!!"
"SHE'S DYING!!!!"
"SHE'S BREATHING LESS AND LESS!!!"

The girl who's dying? That's me, Kamilla... An alien. Or that's what scientists call my condition...

"Mya get me a towel."
"Yes, sir."
"Chris, get me my tools."
"Yes, sir."
"Rick, help me put her on the table."
"Yes, sir."
"And, Mira, plug in the cords."
"Yes, sir."

Right now they're undergoing major surgery on me.
I'll tell you how it came to this...

It was the middle of the day, and I was headed to lunch with my best friend, Chloe.
"Hey, Kam?"
"Yeah, Clo?"
"Have you ever thought about the afterlife?" Chloe, being the drama queen she is, looked up at the heavens. As if she was waiting for her guardian angel to pop up saying "--Oh, you'll LOVE it here, Chloe! It's like you never died!".
I sighed, looking up aswell, "I never thought about it."
"What do you think death will be like??"
I looked at my best friend, expecting her to say "I'm KIDDING!! Gawd, why would I wanna' talk about death! How depressing!"
But, she just looked at me.
"Since when did you become goth, Chloe?!"
"I'm not goth!"
"Well, you're just talkin' about death and stuff..."
"AND?! Come ON, Kamilla. Just answer the question!!!"
"Fine, fine. I don----"
Suddenly, it felt as though I was stabbed in the back. Although, the doctors said I had no stab wounds, I felt a sharp pain seep through my body, and next thing I knew... I was in a hospital.

"Towel."
"Nn?"
"TOWEL."
"Oh! So sorry, sir."
"...she's dying."
"Nn?"
"SHE'S DYING."
"Oh my!"

I was slowly going into the light... "What do you think it will feel like when we die?"
I'll know now, Chloe.

I was dying... This will be my last my breath... Goodbye, Mom, Dad, Chloe...

"YOU CANNOT!"
"W-Who's that? Who're you?" I looked around. The room was all white. Was this heaven? Is the voice... The voice of my guardian angel?
Suddenly, a beautiful girl, with light brown hair, and a white dress and wings, appeared in the room.
"It's not your time... You still have to meet him."
"Meet who?"
The angel gasped, "oh no! I've told you to much!! Ah-em... Nevermind. I didn't say anything."
I sighed. What's the point of saying things to me if I can't know what those things are?
"I'm sending you back."
"Like... Back to LIFE?!"
"Yes."
I ran up and tried to hug her... But I failed because she was translucent.
And, with a wave of something in her hand, I began to vanish.
"Goodbye! I will see you when the time comes."
"BYE!" I waved happily, smiling for the first time in a while.
"OH! By the way, my name is Geo!"
Cool name.
I beamed at her, and then I was gone.
"OH MY BABY!" My mother and my father hugged my as soon as I opened my eyes.
"KAMILLA!!!" Chloe squeezed her way past my parents and hugged me.
I have a brother, but he's in the army, so he couldn't come. But I could almost feel his happiness from his line of duty.


I never knew how precious life was...
Untill it was almost taken from me.

Well... I sighed... I have Geo to thank.

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Hope you enjoyed the first chapter!
The song of the chapter was... C'est la vie by Vanessa Carlton
And I want at least 8 comments for this chapter.
Thanx!
Love you guys!

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