Vampires In Wonderland
So basicly I took the story of Alice In Wonderland and gave it a vampire twist. I changed a lot from the story of Alice In Wonderland to make it a dark version, a vampire world you can say. (Note: This is an old story of mine that I have re-posted to read easier with the new story form here on Quibblo.)
Chapter 1
The Dream
It's so dark...and cold. What is this place? I walked slowly through the long,
dark hall with only the sound of my foot steps echoing through the hall. The floor was designed in red and black checkers and the walls were painted black. As I walked I reached a middle room with a round antique table. There was a red shinny apple on top. I turned and saw myself in the mirror on the wall. I gasped with wide eyes looking at my outfit. I was wearing an outfit like Alice in Alice In Wonderland...! Except instead of a blue dress I was wearing a black dress. My apron was red instead of white and my head band and stockings were red as well.
Alice: "What the...?" I whispered staring in the mirror.
Mysterious Guy: "Alice" a voice called from behind.
I turned to see a man with dark wavy hair and green eyes looking at me frantic.
Mysterious Guy: "Alice he's coming! Come with me quickly!" he shouted.
Alice: "Who's coming?" I asked.
He held out his hand to me,
Mysterious Guy: "Alice, please!"
I felt a cold chill flow through me and I became dizzy. My eyes fluttered.
Mysterious Voice: "Come with me" another voice said.
The mysterious man was staring into the darkness. I turned around but didn't see anyone.
Mysterious Voice: "Alice" the voice whispered again.
I couldn't control my body. I walked slowly towards the sound of the voice. I was in a daze.
Mysterious Voice: "Come with me" it called.
Mysterious Guy: "Don't!" he shouted. "Run! Alice run!"
I turned to him,
Alice: "Help me" I whispered.
The man held out his hand and I reached for him. Looking at him I noticed his face turn from fear to sadness as he gazed ahead of me. Two hands reached from around me and pulled me back.
Mysterious Guy: "No!" the he shouted.
I couldn't see who grabbed me. I could only feel the fear rushing through me. My heart raced, my body was shaking, and tears rolled down my cheeks as I breathed heavily. There was a sharp pain in my neck. Make it stop! It hurts, It hurts! Please! The pain... so much pain. I could feel myself getting tired and then getting cold, very cold. All I could hear were faint sounds of someone calling to me. I gasped springing up in bed breathing heavily. I began to calm down as I glancing around at the familiar room.
Alice: "A dream" I nodded.
Alice's Mom: "Alice, you're going to be late for school" she called.
Alice: "Great."
dark hall with only the sound of my foot steps echoing through the hall. The floor was designed in red and black checkers and the walls were painted black. As I walked I reached a middle room with a round antique table. There was a red shinny apple on top. I turned and saw myself in the mirror on the wall. I gasped with wide eyes looking at my outfit. I was wearing an outfit like Alice in Alice In Wonderland...! Except instead of a blue dress I was wearing a black dress. My apron was red instead of white and my head band and stockings were red as well.
Alice: "What the...?" I whispered staring in the mirror.
Mysterious Guy: "Alice" a voice called from behind.
I turned to see a man with dark wavy hair and green eyes looking at me frantic.
Mysterious Guy: "Alice he's coming! Come with me quickly!" he shouted.
Alice: "Who's coming?" I asked.
He held out his hand to me,
Mysterious Guy: "Alice, please!"
I felt a cold chill flow through me and I became dizzy. My eyes fluttered.
Mysterious Voice: "Come with me" another voice said.
The mysterious man was staring into the darkness. I turned around but didn't see anyone.
Mysterious Voice: "Alice" the voice whispered again.
I couldn't control my body. I walked slowly towards the sound of the voice. I was in a daze.
Mysterious Voice: "Come with me" it called.
Mysterious Guy: "Don't!" he shouted. "Run! Alice run!"
I turned to him,
Alice: "Help me" I whispered.
The man held out his hand and I reached for him. Looking at him I noticed his face turn from fear to sadness as he gazed ahead of me. Two hands reached from around me and pulled me back.
Mysterious Guy: "No!" the he shouted.
I couldn't see who grabbed me. I could only feel the fear rushing through me. My heart raced, my body was shaking, and tears rolled down my cheeks as I breathed heavily. There was a sharp pain in my neck. Make it stop! It hurts, It hurts! Please! The pain... so much pain. I could feel myself getting tired and then getting cold, very cold. All I could hear were faint sounds of someone calling to me. I gasped springing up in bed breathing heavily. I began to calm down as I glancing around at the familiar room.
Alice: "A dream" I nodded.
Alice's Mom: "Alice, you're going to be late for school" she called.
Alice: "Great."



6 Comments
love this story.
i just did the play alice in wonderland for my drama class. your story is so much better.
Why thank you. =)
More plzzzzz I wanna see what happens next
yeh i wanna know what happons next too!!!
Thats creepy
very interesting i really like it (ur a really good writer)!!
basically i luvvvved it!!! i thought it was awesome, cant wait for the next chapter!!!