Hell Has Walls
Yupp, I took the recommendation for a story and used it :) Thank you Starry_sky for the idea! Loved it! Anyway, this is my first horror/suspense/thriller story I've ever written from my imagination. I've only written one other, but that was based off of a Fright Night thing I attended. I hope you all enjoy what plans to come, and try not to bite your fingernails too much :)
Cast of Characters:
Lucian Callister - dark brown hair, hazel eyes, "leader" of the group of friends
Maddi Groves - dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, main character of the story, dating Lucian
Alex Blackwell - light brown hair, brown eyes, acts before he thinks
Sam Fox - light blonde hair, blue eyes, currently dating Brandon
Hayden Rose - dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, Lucian's cousin
Brandon Raine - light brown hair, brown eyes, very athletic
Melissa Johnson - dark brown hair, brown eyes, slightly emotionally insecure
Shawn Burkley - light brown hair, brown eyes, very humorous and funny
Summary:
Eight kids. One house.
It was a regular summer vacation. They were just coming back from a week-long camp at a lake in Michigan. The bus driver decided to take a short cut through some woods in order to save the kids some time. It turned out to be the last mistake he never made. The bus broke down, and he was never seen again. Maddi and her seven friends are left to find shelter and fend for themselves in an old mansion from a brewing thunderstorm. They reach the house - but can't get out. Something doesn't want them to leave. Something wishes to keep them there. Something wishes to draw blood. The only question is.....what?
Eight kids. One house.
No escape.
Lucian Callister - dark brown hair, hazel eyes, "leader" of the group of friends
Maddi Groves - dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, main character of the story, dating Lucian
Alex Blackwell - light brown hair, brown eyes, acts before he thinks
Sam Fox - light blonde hair, blue eyes, currently dating Brandon
Hayden Rose - dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, Lucian's cousin
Brandon Raine - light brown hair, brown eyes, very athletic
Melissa Johnson - dark brown hair, brown eyes, slightly emotionally insecure
Shawn Burkley - light brown hair, brown eyes, very humorous and funny
Summary:
Eight kids. One house.
It was a regular summer vacation. They were just coming back from a week-long camp at a lake in Michigan. The bus driver decided to take a short cut through some woods in order to save the kids some time. It turned out to be the last mistake he never made. The bus broke down, and he was never seen again. Maddi and her seven friends are left to find shelter and fend for themselves in an old mansion from a brewing thunderstorm. They reach the house - but can't get out. Something doesn't want them to leave. Something wishes to keep them there. Something wishes to draw blood. The only question is.....what?
Eight kids. One house.
No escape.
46 Comments
can't wait but please don't let it be about demons
yeah that would creep me out..... but still write it PLZ
Haha, I think you two are gonna have to tough it out ;)
koo...now if u add some story to it...lol jk
I know, I'll be adding more of an actual story to it. Just wanted to set a few things up first. That, and I had to go, and I just wanted to get something up XD
luv the sound of it! will def read!
OMZ!!! I LOVE Horror :D
Sounds FREAKIN interestin so I'm so gonna read it :)
cool can't wait
CNT WAIT TO READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D
AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
You'd better write quickly, or there will be bodily injury involved!
now this is very good i love it its gripping me already
Ooooh sounds epic cant wait to read it xD
Sounds great! Can't wait!