CRIMINAL MINDED
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CAUTION HAS EXPLICIT LINGO... read if u dare
My name is Jeremy. Or if you’re my down as.s. home boi its J.
See I’m a drug lord now. But, a drug lord at the age of 21 is something you don’t quite here of.
Most guys my age, well they get paid to do the harder work on the streets.
The kind of work that could get a n.I.g.ga like me caught up. I got to keep knowing who is on my bad side and who is on the right side. So if you think about snitching on me your jeopardizing the lives of your bloodline.
So this is my life. Come and check out what you been missing.
The estate is located in Columbia. White walls surround my fortress.
There are about thirty different rooms in the place. An underground yayo lab.
Acers of land surround me. A lot of holes out there with peoples names I cant mention.
Im smart enough to know that the law is as crooked as my own momma.
Thanks to my momma I have a lot of this. She hooked up with the head hancho of this place and he suddenly dies passes me the place and tells me to honor the name. Hence Im always watching my back. I got no time for tricks im paranoid twenty-four- seven.
The number one rule don’t get high on your own supply.
A rule I stay correct to. But, I got other people in the states. Some Americans got the good stuff too. The drug market is a high paid well respected job. If you’re a billionaire like me, then your in the right business.
But, if you cant trust no one, what do you do?
So yea, I’m focused. So focused woman seem to not be any interest to me. I have no respect for a woman. They end up being your first mistake to all falls. Always bringing you drama no matter the cost. Thats why momma is on lockdown. Tied up in a padded big room. Dont trust her for nothing. not even good for making me tortillas and beans no more.
Sh.I.t. it’s money over B.ich.ez man. Or your better off dead.
So I am 100 percent clean aint even have no kids. Don’t plan on bringing any into the world at all.
Today is my sixth month in charge of the new and refined “J ESTATE”
Yea. Its simple all I needed to do was change the first name from Paulo to J.
I got a new guy in my office who is the same age as me. He wants a job. Wants to join me. Problem he has is I don’t know this vato. This light skinned fragile boy in front of me smells like a PIG.
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comment let me know what you guys think.
See I’m a drug lord now. But, a drug lord at the age of 21 is something you don’t quite here of.
Most guys my age, well they get paid to do the harder work on the streets.
The kind of work that could get a n.I.g.ga like me caught up. I got to keep knowing who is on my bad side and who is on the right side. So if you think about snitching on me your jeopardizing the lives of your bloodline.
So this is my life. Come and check out what you been missing.
The estate is located in Columbia. White walls surround my fortress.
There are about thirty different rooms in the place. An underground yayo lab.
Acers of land surround me. A lot of holes out there with peoples names I cant mention.
Im smart enough to know that the law is as crooked as my own momma.
Thanks to my momma I have a lot of this. She hooked up with the head hancho of this place and he suddenly dies passes me the place and tells me to honor the name. Hence Im always watching my back. I got no time for tricks im paranoid twenty-four- seven.
The number one rule don’t get high on your own supply.
A rule I stay correct to. But, I got other people in the states. Some Americans got the good stuff too. The drug market is a high paid well respected job. If you’re a billionaire like me, then your in the right business.
But, if you cant trust no one, what do you do?
So yea, I’m focused. So focused woman seem to not be any interest to me. I have no respect for a woman. They end up being your first mistake to all falls. Always bringing you drama no matter the cost. Thats why momma is on lockdown. Tied up in a padded big room. Dont trust her for nothing. not even good for making me tortillas and beans no more.
Sh.I.t. it’s money over B.ich.ez man. Or your better off dead.
So I am 100 percent clean aint even have no kids. Don’t plan on bringing any into the world at all.
Today is my sixth month in charge of the new and refined “J ESTATE”
Yea. Its simple all I needed to do was change the first name from Paulo to J.
I got a new guy in my office who is the same age as me. He wants a job. Wants to join me. Problem he has is I don’t know this vato. This light skinned fragile boy in front of me smells like a PIG.
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comment let me know what you guys think.
17 Comments
thanks you for those words of priceless wisdom.
oh man that sent shingles down my spine!! AWE......SUM... HA
i know this is a stupid question but was that poetry or story?
either way it was fvcking coooooool!!
:D PEACE OUT MY HOMEY
its a story from J's point of view.... hope u like chapter 2
You definitely got some awesome writing skills you should write a book your really great at this a true natural
i dislike the language, but its a great story
COOOOOOOOOOOOL beans me bru!!! next please :D
AwwwwEsOme!!! I am definetly gOing to finish reaDING THis stOry !! Seems sO ..InteNse!! Luv it !!! I'll cOmment On the oTher chpters wHen i get tO thEm!!
HELLZ YESSS! keep on reading!
Awesome story!
thats so nice i like it!!!
Omgg sooo goood
love it Angie!
~Hayley
awesome story...i like it...
thanks for reading i know its a lil graphic on the words. but, its a story on a drug lord u know!!
HAHAHA
=)