The Dark Alleyway(the series)
heres a series of my 1 story i posted,plz let me know if u think its good or if it suckz ballz
I was walking with my friend Ashley. We were on our way to my house house for a horror movie marathon.
Thats when she said,"I dare you to go take a walk trough the old abandoned alley. The one where there have been 13 deaths in the past month."
"Yeah,I'll do it. I'm not scared." I said, not wanting to look like a chicken.
We walked to the old abandoned alley. She stayed outsde the enterance while I went in. There was blood and dead bodies everywhere. Yuck!
Thats when she said,"I dare you to go take a walk trough the old abandoned alley. The one where there have been 13 deaths in the past month."
"Yeah,I'll do it. I'm not scared." I said, not wanting to look like a chicken.
We walked to the old abandoned alley. She stayed outsde the enterance while I went in. There was blood and dead bodies everywhere. Yuck!
81 Comments
i love it your good at writing
thankz
your really good
p.s thats a complamant
u really think im good?
yep really good
thankz,again
anyways camp won't be as good without you guys
aww,thankz,i think
i will be gone about 1-2 weeks
that suckz
this is really good! But I liked ur short story version of it better :) ... no offence intended!
as i said 2 the 1st one this is frikkin awesome r u going 2 make it different though with different ending and stuff...love story between the girl and the boy??
yeah i will
I liked the part where she said that he was the only creep, it's funny, yet creepy!
There were dead bodies everywhere. Yuck!
hahaha XD XD XD