A hogwarts story!
Its about a girl from New Zealand called Trina and she goes to hogwarts in her 5th year because her parents got job transfers atleast thats what Trina thinks DUN-DUN-DUNN!!!!!!!!!!
Im finishing it for my sister cause she is really busy right now
Chapter 1
The talking stupid in this chapter and I am sorry but the next chapter its normal:)
"Mum i dont wanna go!" i whined at my mother for what seemed like the millionth time. I knew i sounde like a child but i didnt care i won't to go home. I was on the hogwarts express about to leave, the train started moving and my mum said something that sounded like to late. I turned away from the door to find somewhere to sit.
I walked up and down the train looking for a empty compartment and after about ten times i decided to go sit with two blonde girls that looked younger than me.
Before I could even get close to opening the door two gusy came out of the compartment behind me. one of them had red hair and the other had dark messy hair and glasses.
The guy with red hair:hey do you need some where to sit?
oh god i must have looked like a complete idoit walking up and down the train.
me: umm yeah
i looked down at my feet and said thanks
We walked into there compartment and I threw my bags up on the bag thingy and sat down next to a girl with frizzy hair that was already sitting down.
the girl sitting next to me said hello my names Hermione Granger
the guy with red hair:my names Ron Weasley
the guy with glasses: and im Harry Potter
I stared a bit when Harry said his name because we talk about him in my old school, then I realized I was being rude.
Me:I'm Trina
Hermione:nice to meet you Trina
Then the boys said yeah so I said it back.
It was awkward for a bit but then we started talking and it was heaps better. We were in the same year and hermione started talking about houses and said they were in griffindor. i hoped i would be to.
After a while me and Hermione went to get changed.
Once we got change we walked to one of Hermiones friends compartment. Her name was Ginny and she said she was Ron's sister.
They talk for ages while I was texting my bestie from back home Paris.
When she was telling me about the new teacher at my old school and my phone said there was no signal!!!
Me: OMG!!!!!
Hermione:What's wrong?
She and Ginny stopped talking and stared at me.
Me: theres no signal!
Ginny: itll be back soon
Hermione:You should get used to it muggle stuff like cellphones don't work at hogwarts
I just stared at her with my mouth open:O ginny laugh at me.
Me: im going to see if theres signal somewhere else on the train.
Hermione:do you want us to go with you?
Me:nah I'll be fine, I'll see you back at our compartment and nice meeting you Ginny.
as I walked away Ginny said you to.
I was staring at my phone really hard hoping the signal would come back.
After a few minutes I was half way down the the train and I gave and shoved my phone in my pocket.
Before I turned back to go find hermione I saw a really familier looking guy step out of a compartment.
Oh crud its Blaise! I meet him when I was 10 and had like a major crush on him(btw Im waay over him but its still mega embarrassing!).
I quickly turned and hide behind a group of girls but I was to late(!!!) he started walking towards me.
Blaise:Trina is that you?
Im gonna kill my mum for not telling me he was here, I pretended I just noticed him.
Me:Blaise what you doing here?
Blaise going to school obviously
Me:Well ummm bye Blaise see you at school
I walked past him and after five steps I turned to look at him and he was staring at me. I kept walking.
When I got back to my compartment Hermione, Harry and Ron were there with 2 other guys I didnt know.
The guys left as i came in and I sat next to Harry.
Me: I didnt make them leave did I?
Ron: no they were gonna leave anyways.
We talked for abit until the train stopped.
Hermione:We're here!
We got off the train and Hermione told me to go with the first years.
Me and the first years followed this guy that looked half giant and talked really english accenty, to the boats we would be taking up to the castle.
When we got up to the castle there was a oldish teacher, in emarald green robes with her hair pulled into a tight bun and she told us about the four school houses.
She left for some reason I wasnt listening because I was bored out of my mind, I really didnt care about the house thing i just wanted to go back to levi.All the little eleven year olds were looking pretty nervous it was sorta funny
The teacher chick came back and told us to follow her.
We walked into a huge hall with four long house tables and a teachers tablefacing the other way.
In front of the teachers table was a stool with a dusty icky looking pointed wizards hat on it.
A old guy with a really long beard who I figured was Dumbledor, told the school I was a new student from NZ and I would be in my 5th year.
I sat down on the stool and the sorting hat was placed on my head it started talking to its self, when i realized it was talking a got really scared it was a friggin hat it wasnt supposed to talk!!! so I looked for my friends, they were sitting at a table with a group of people i didnt know staring at the hat.
the hat finally decided and it shouted Gryffindor!!!
I jumped off the stool and walked down to my friends.
Hermione:yay your in Gryffindor!!
everyone at the table said stuff like that.
The first years were sorted, we had the feast and Dumbledor spoke and so did a chick from the ministry.Hermione said their M.O.M was interfering at school.
After we went back to our dorms. I shared mine with Hermione, Ginny and this other girl called Timberlee and shes pretty cool a bit hypo. We talked for ages and it made me miss my besties Paris and Grace.
We went to sleep and I had a nice sleep.Peaceful. It was way quieter here than my huge, echoey house in London.
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The next few weeks were awesome!I made heaps of friends, the gryffindors and hufflepuffs are awesome(the hufflpuffs just arnt all that smart), the ravenclaws are nerdy except for Cho Chang and loony, I mean Luna Lovegood and the Slytherins are just Slytherins.
Classes were pretty easy except history of magic which was ultra boring and i forget everything once a walk out the room and potions because I suuck at it.
The only fun thing about potions was annoying snape, singing, talking back, messing with the slytherns potions, anything that disrupts and wastes class time. It was really werid because Snape just lets me and timberlee get away with it and hes really mean to all the other Gryffindors he just smiles at as a little and goes miss sameul, miss smith back to your seats(its kinda creepy).
I'm pretty good mates with Fred and George, Rons older brothers, we prank together sometimes but I ussually just prank with timberlee.
I write to Paris alot Grace dosnt write bacck very muchanymore, Paris says its because she got a boyfriend but paris wont tell me who grrr.
Blaise and I talk sometimes and we're mates but hes a slytherin so yeah and Im over my embarasedness around him so thats cool.
After class one friday about 5 weeks into school I walked up to my dorm to find clothes thrown everywhere and Ginny and Timberlee sitting in the middle of the mess looking at clothes.
Ginny just looks at me and goes your invites over there and pointed to my red and gold(gryffindor pride!!!!) bed.
On my bed was a invitation on black card to a party in something called the ROR after dinner at eight with no one under 4th year allowed.
Me:whats the ror?
Timberlee:The room of requirment duh now shush im tring to find clothes!
Ginny:Thats a first usually your telling us to be louder.
Hermione(walking in the room):not that she needs to tell Trina to be louder.
she and Ginny laughed.
Me:Shut up!
Timberlee(throws a purple hair brush at hermione):yeah shut up!
I sat down to look at my clothes.
Ginny:You going to the party Hermione?
hermione looked at her feet:No, it's not really my thing...
Timberlee:But H you have to!!
Me and Ginny:Yeah!
Hermione:But I don't have anything to wear
Me:I'm sure you do
Ginny:And if not your the same size as timberlee.
Timberlee:Yeah wear some of my clothes.
We started going through our clothesand by six we all had outfits and a huge, colorful mess of clothes to clean up.
Ginnys:A cute short dress that was black at the topand all colour full from the waist down(dint know what her brothers are going to say about how short it is lol).
Timberlees:Grey ripped skinny jeans, a white top that says what the hell on it, black chucks and heaps of thin black chains.
Hermiones:Dark blue skinnies, boots, leather jacket, and a animal print white top.We fored her to borrow the clothes off timberlee.
Mine:the dress in the pic!
we looked awesome!!!!Hermione looked really different it was soooooo cool
We threw on t-shirts and jeans to go down to dinner.The boys were already there talking about the party.
Harry:Are you guys going to the party?
Ginny:yup and if you hadnt noticed we are girls.
Me:It's gonna be awesome!
Hermione:are you?
Ron:Yeah.
We had food, all I had was one of those little roll thingys and Umbridge talked about something I couldnt listen to because all I could think about was how she looked all awful and pink eww.I got up to leave I dont want to look at that toad-faced fasion disaster.
Me:I'm gonna go kay?
Everyone nodded and said bye and Timberlee jumpped up with her usual hyponess and hugged me goodbye.
I walked quickly up to the common room. It was empty but i could hear people upstairs talking and playing music real loud, I knew the song and started singing.
I walked over to the fire to think and the door slammed open it gave me a huge fright and Harry came in looking like he ran the whole way here.
Me(worried):Harry are you ok?
He took a few seconds to get his breath back
Harry:Yeah I'm fine.
Me:Then why do you look like you ran the whole way here?
Harry:Cause I need to ask you something
He was standing right in front of me, our faces almost touching.
Harry:Trina, will you go to the party with me?
OMG he asked me out!!!!
Me:Umm yeah i would love to!!
Harry:Cool I'll meet you down here at 8
Me:I'll be there!
i ran up the stairs to my dorm.I couldnt believe what just happened.Ginny was gonna hate me!She goes out with Micheal Corner to make it look like shes over Harry.But shes not!She told me.
Crud this isnt gonna go well!
Ginny and Timberlee came up and Timberlee got changed first and left me standing outside alone with Ginny she was babbling about the party and I couldnt take it any more!
I cut her off and said:Ginny what would you say if I said I liked Harry?
Ginny:I would say thats great!
Me:ok then I like Harry and just before he asked me to go to the party with him and I said yes.
I looked at her feeling kinda guilty for saying yes and she shouted at me!
Ginny:I CANT BELIEVE YOU WOULD DO THAT YOU KNEW I LIKED HIM!!!!!!!
me(yelling but not as loud as her):But you just said it was great!!!!
Ginny:THAT YOU LIKED HIM NOT THAT YOU WERE GOING OUT WITH HIM!!!!!!!!
Me:BUT YOUR GOING WITH YOUR BOYFRIEND MICHEAL REMEMBER!!!!!!!
Hermione and Timberlee got to me and Ginny at the same time, I swear if they haddened been there I would have slapped Ginny.I quickly ran into the dorm and got changed slowly.I was mega pissed off!
When I came out Ginny was gone.Hermione got changed and unlocked the door so me and Timberlee could do our makeup.It was silent and akward.
Finally Hermione said some thing:Ginny told us what happened, she's really upset.
Timberlee: well Ginny shouldnt be going out with Micheal Corner if she likes Harry.(she paused for a second)Not that I'm taking sides or anything.
She said it like she was but I didnt have time to talk.
Me:I really want to talk about this but i have to go I was ment to meet Harry two minutes ago and btw you guys look great.
I packed up my makeup and left.
I walked down the stairs to the common room all slow and gracefully like they do in movies and that was a epic fail!I forgot about the step thats just a little longer then the others and tripped down the last of the steps, thank god someone caught me!
I looked up to Harry's gorgeous green eyes.He helped me up, I fixed my dress swearing at it in my head for being so short and hoping I didn't flash anything because there was heaps of gryffindors around and Lavender Brown was laughing at me.
Me(really embarrased):Thanks
Harry:thats okay, ready to go?
Me:Yeah lets but we might want to avoid Ginny, shes not to happy with me right now...
He looked at me confused and I just shoock my head.
Harry:right lets go!
We walked to the R.O.R, I was really excited and hyper.My first Hogwarts party I wondered if british partys were different to New Zealand ones and worried I was dressed wrong.
We walked up and down the corridor 4 times and a door appeared.
The room behined the door was amazing.It was packed with people dancing and talking, the music was really loud and up beat and there were colorful lights flashing everywhere.
Out of nowhere fred and George came to talk to me and harry.
Fred(looking at me and harry holding hands):Well George what do we have here?
George:Well fred looks like Harry finally got the guts to ask out Trina
Harry:shut up!
Me(cutting off there conversation):Would love to talk but my favorite songs on(I turned to harry)lets go!
I ran off dragging Harry with me right to the middle of the room.Harry and I danced for ages and when Timberlee and Hermione finaly got there I danced with them as well.
3 hours later I was super tired so I leaned against a wall.
Harry:want me to get you a drink?
Me:Yup that would be awesome!
Just seconds after Harry disappeared Blaise appeared next to me.
Blaise:Heey!
Me:Hi blaise!!!!
Blaise:Having fun?
Me:yes this partys awesome!
Blaise:Well umm Trina I dont know how to say this but umm
And he leaned down and kissed me!!!!Ahhh!I didnt know what to do we were mates!Not wanting to make him feel bad I kissed back not much just a little.
Harry:TRINA WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!!!!!!!
Blaise got his stupid face off mine and all that was left of Harry was two smashed glasses of butterbeer cause he had run off!
I slapped Blaise as hard as I could and run off and a few meters away a plain black door appeared, I quickly threw it open and ran inside and ssat down on a small purple couch and cried
If Harry hated me I would die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Mum i dont wanna go!" i whined at my mother for what seemed like the millionth time. I knew i sounde like a child but i didnt care i won't to go home. I was on the hogwarts express about to leave, the train started moving and my mum said something that sounded like to late. I turned away from the door to find somewhere to sit.
I walked up and down the train looking for a empty compartment and after about ten times i decided to go sit with two blonde girls that looked younger than me.
Before I could even get close to opening the door two gusy came out of the compartment behind me. one of them had red hair and the other had dark messy hair and glasses.
The guy with red hair:hey do you need some where to sit?
oh god i must have looked like a complete idoit walking up and down the train.
me: umm yeah
i looked down at my feet and said thanks
We walked into there compartment and I threw my bags up on the bag thingy and sat down next to a girl with frizzy hair that was already sitting down.
the girl sitting next to me said hello my names Hermione Granger
the guy with red hair:my names Ron Weasley
the guy with glasses: and im Harry Potter
I stared a bit when Harry said his name because we talk about him in my old school, then I realized I was being rude.
Me:I'm Trina
Hermione:nice to meet you Trina
Then the boys said yeah so I said it back.
It was awkward for a bit but then we started talking and it was heaps better. We were in the same year and hermione started talking about houses and said they were in griffindor. i hoped i would be to.
After a while me and Hermione went to get changed.
Once we got change we walked to one of Hermiones friends compartment. Her name was Ginny and she said she was Ron's sister.
They talk for ages while I was texting my bestie from back home Paris.
When she was telling me about the new teacher at my old school and my phone said there was no signal!!!
Me: OMG!!!!!
Hermione:What's wrong?
She and Ginny stopped talking and stared at me.
Me: theres no signal!
Ginny: itll be back soon
Hermione:You should get used to it muggle stuff like cellphones don't work at hogwarts
I just stared at her with my mouth open:O ginny laugh at me.
Me: im going to see if theres signal somewhere else on the train.
Hermione:do you want us to go with you?
Me:nah I'll be fine, I'll see you back at our compartment and nice meeting you Ginny.
as I walked away Ginny said you to.
I was staring at my phone really hard hoping the signal would come back.
After a few minutes I was half way down the the train and I gave and shoved my phone in my pocket.
Before I turned back to go find hermione I saw a really familier looking guy step out of a compartment.
Oh crud its Blaise! I meet him when I was 10 and had like a major crush on him(btw Im waay over him but its still mega embarrassing!).
I quickly turned and hide behind a group of girls but I was to late(!!!) he started walking towards me.
Blaise:Trina is that you?
Im gonna kill my mum for not telling me he was here, I pretended I just noticed him.
Me:Blaise what you doing here?
Blaise going to school obviously
Me:Well ummm bye Blaise see you at school
I walked past him and after five steps I turned to look at him and he was staring at me. I kept walking.
When I got back to my compartment Hermione, Harry and Ron were there with 2 other guys I didnt know.
The guys left as i came in and I sat next to Harry.
Me: I didnt make them leave did I?
Ron: no they were gonna leave anyways.
We talked for abit until the train stopped.
Hermione:We're here!
We got off the train and Hermione told me to go with the first years.
Me and the first years followed this guy that looked half giant and talked really english accenty, to the boats we would be taking up to the castle.
When we got up to the castle there was a oldish teacher, in emarald green robes with her hair pulled into a tight bun and she told us about the four school houses.
She left for some reason I wasnt listening because I was bored out of my mind, I really didnt care about the house thing i just wanted to go back to levi.All the little eleven year olds were looking pretty nervous it was sorta funny
The teacher chick came back and told us to follow her.
We walked into a huge hall with four long house tables and a teachers tablefacing the other way.
In front of the teachers table was a stool with a dusty icky looking pointed wizards hat on it.
A old guy with a really long beard who I figured was Dumbledor, told the school I was a new student from NZ and I would be in my 5th year.
I sat down on the stool and the sorting hat was placed on my head it started talking to its self, when i realized it was talking a got really scared it was a friggin hat it wasnt supposed to talk!!! so I looked for my friends, they were sitting at a table with a group of people i didnt know staring at the hat.
the hat finally decided and it shouted Gryffindor!!!
I jumped off the stool and walked down to my friends.
Hermione:yay your in Gryffindor!!
everyone at the table said stuff like that.
The first years were sorted, we had the feast and Dumbledor spoke and so did a chick from the ministry.Hermione said their M.O.M was interfering at school.
After we went back to our dorms. I shared mine with Hermione, Ginny and this other girl called Timberlee and shes pretty cool a bit hypo. We talked for ages and it made me miss my besties Paris and Grace.
We went to sleep and I had a nice sleep.Peaceful. It was way quieter here than my huge, echoey house in London.
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The next few weeks were awesome!I made heaps of friends, the gryffindors and hufflepuffs are awesome(the hufflpuffs just arnt all that smart), the ravenclaws are nerdy except for Cho Chang and loony, I mean Luna Lovegood and the Slytherins are just Slytherins.
Classes were pretty easy except history of magic which was ultra boring and i forget everything once a walk out the room and potions because I suuck at it.
The only fun thing about potions was annoying snape, singing, talking back, messing with the slytherns potions, anything that disrupts and wastes class time. It was really werid because Snape just lets me and timberlee get away with it and hes really mean to all the other Gryffindors he just smiles at as a little and goes miss sameul, miss smith back to your seats(its kinda creepy).
I'm pretty good mates with Fred and George, Rons older brothers, we prank together sometimes but I ussually just prank with timberlee.
I write to Paris alot Grace dosnt write bacck very muchanymore, Paris says its because she got a boyfriend but paris wont tell me who grrr.
Blaise and I talk sometimes and we're mates but hes a slytherin so yeah and Im over my embarasedness around him so thats cool.
After class one friday about 5 weeks into school I walked up to my dorm to find clothes thrown everywhere and Ginny and Timberlee sitting in the middle of the mess looking at clothes.
Ginny just looks at me and goes your invites over there and pointed to my red and gold(gryffindor pride!!!!) bed.
On my bed was a invitation on black card to a party in something called the ROR after dinner at eight with no one under 4th year allowed.
Me:whats the ror?
Timberlee:The room of requirment duh now shush im tring to find clothes!
Ginny:Thats a first usually your telling us to be louder.
Hermione(walking in the room):not that she needs to tell Trina to be louder.
she and Ginny laughed.
Me:Shut up!
Timberlee(throws a purple hair brush at hermione):yeah shut up!
I sat down to look at my clothes.
Ginny:You going to the party Hermione?
hermione looked at her feet:No, it's not really my thing...
Timberlee:But H you have to!!
Me and Ginny:Yeah!
Hermione:But I don't have anything to wear
Me:I'm sure you do
Ginny:And if not your the same size as timberlee.
Timberlee:Yeah wear some of my clothes.
We started going through our clothesand by six we all had outfits and a huge, colorful mess of clothes to clean up.
Ginnys:A cute short dress that was black at the topand all colour full from the waist down(dint know what her brothers are going to say about how short it is lol).
Timberlees:Grey ripped skinny jeans, a white top that says what the hell on it, black chucks and heaps of thin black chains.
Hermiones:Dark blue skinnies, boots, leather jacket, and a animal print white top.We fored her to borrow the clothes off timberlee.
Mine:the dress in the pic!
we looked awesome!!!!Hermione looked really different it was soooooo cool
We threw on t-shirts and jeans to go down to dinner.The boys were already there talking about the party.
Harry:Are you guys going to the party?
Ginny:yup and if you hadnt noticed we are girls.
Me:It's gonna be awesome!
Hermione:are you?
Ron:Yeah.
We had food, all I had was one of those little roll thingys and Umbridge talked about something I couldnt listen to because all I could think about was how she looked all awful and pink eww.I got up to leave I dont want to look at that toad-faced fasion disaster.
Me:I'm gonna go kay?
Everyone nodded and said bye and Timberlee jumpped up with her usual hyponess and hugged me goodbye.
I walked quickly up to the common room. It was empty but i could hear people upstairs talking and playing music real loud, I knew the song and started singing.
I walked over to the fire to think and the door slammed open it gave me a huge fright and Harry came in looking like he ran the whole way here.
Me(worried):Harry are you ok?
He took a few seconds to get his breath back
Harry:Yeah I'm fine.
Me:Then why do you look like you ran the whole way here?
Harry:Cause I need to ask you something
He was standing right in front of me, our faces almost touching.
Harry:Trina, will you go to the party with me?
OMG he asked me out!!!!
Me:Umm yeah i would love to!!
Harry:Cool I'll meet you down here at 8
Me:I'll be there!
i ran up the stairs to my dorm.I couldnt believe what just happened.Ginny was gonna hate me!She goes out with Micheal Corner to make it look like shes over Harry.But shes not!She told me.
Crud this isnt gonna go well!
Ginny and Timberlee came up and Timberlee got changed first and left me standing outside alone with Ginny she was babbling about the party and I couldnt take it any more!
I cut her off and said:Ginny what would you say if I said I liked Harry?
Ginny:I would say thats great!
Me:ok then I like Harry and just before he asked me to go to the party with him and I said yes.
I looked at her feeling kinda guilty for saying yes and she shouted at me!
Ginny:I CANT BELIEVE YOU WOULD DO THAT YOU KNEW I LIKED HIM!!!!!!!
me(yelling but not as loud as her):But you just said it was great!!!!
Ginny:THAT YOU LIKED HIM NOT THAT YOU WERE GOING OUT WITH HIM!!!!!!!!
Me:BUT YOUR GOING WITH YOUR BOYFRIEND MICHEAL REMEMBER!!!!!!!
Hermione and Timberlee got to me and Ginny at the same time, I swear if they haddened been there I would have slapped Ginny.I quickly ran into the dorm and got changed slowly.I was mega pissed off!
When I came out Ginny was gone.Hermione got changed and unlocked the door so me and Timberlee could do our makeup.It was silent and akward.
Finally Hermione said some thing:Ginny told us what happened, she's really upset.
Timberlee: well Ginny shouldnt be going out with Micheal Corner if she likes Harry.(she paused for a second)Not that I'm taking sides or anything.
She said it like she was but I didnt have time to talk.
Me:I really want to talk about this but i have to go I was ment to meet Harry two minutes ago and btw you guys look great.
I packed up my makeup and left.
I walked down the stairs to the common room all slow and gracefully like they do in movies and that was a epic fail!I forgot about the step thats just a little longer then the others and tripped down the last of the steps, thank god someone caught me!
I looked up to Harry's gorgeous green eyes.He helped me up, I fixed my dress swearing at it in my head for being so short and hoping I didn't flash anything because there was heaps of gryffindors around and Lavender Brown was laughing at me.
Me(really embarrased):Thanks
Harry:thats okay, ready to go?
Me:Yeah lets but we might want to avoid Ginny, shes not to happy with me right now...
He looked at me confused and I just shoock my head.
Harry:right lets go!
We walked to the R.O.R, I was really excited and hyper.My first Hogwarts party I wondered if british partys were different to New Zealand ones and worried I was dressed wrong.
We walked up and down the corridor 4 times and a door appeared.
The room behined the door was amazing.It was packed with people dancing and talking, the music was really loud and up beat and there were colorful lights flashing everywhere.
Out of nowhere fred and George came to talk to me and harry.
Fred(looking at me and harry holding hands):Well George what do we have here?
George:Well fred looks like Harry finally got the guts to ask out Trina
Harry:shut up!
Me(cutting off there conversation):Would love to talk but my favorite songs on(I turned to harry)lets go!
I ran off dragging Harry with me right to the middle of the room.Harry and I danced for ages and when Timberlee and Hermione finaly got there I danced with them as well.
3 hours later I was super tired so I leaned against a wall.
Harry:want me to get you a drink?
Me:Yup that would be awesome!
Just seconds after Harry disappeared Blaise appeared next to me.
Blaise:Heey!
Me:Hi blaise!!!!
Blaise:Having fun?
Me:yes this partys awesome!
Blaise:Well umm Trina I dont know how to say this but umm
And he leaned down and kissed me!!!!Ahhh!I didnt know what to do we were mates!Not wanting to make him feel bad I kissed back not much just a little.
Harry:TRINA WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!!!!!!!
Blaise got his stupid face off mine and all that was left of Harry was two smashed glasses of butterbeer cause he had run off!
I slapped Blaise as hard as I could and run off and a few meters away a plain black door appeared, I quickly threw it open and ran inside and ssat down on a small purple couch and cried
If Harry hated me I would die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



4 Comments
You should really put quotation marks (" ") when using dialogues.
Other than that, I think it'll be a great story.
Awesome!
really good! ch 5 plz!!!!
AWESOME!! nxt plzz!!