broken steel if you aren't above this age don't read 11 is the age you must be to read this
sorry i can't make the figures caution contions blood and gore
Chapter 1
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one boy chosen to rid the world of evil
marth:uhh where am i
boss:i expected more of a challenge from the chosen one
marth:what
boss:this realm will be destroyed chosen one
marth:ahh slashes with sword
boss:that the best you got lauches destrocto blast
marth:out cold
3 hour later
marth:ah what happened
cindy:i was sent to find you hey you got a marking on your fore head
marth:lets get out of here
cindy:ok
later that day at the hospital
cindy:what are doing
marth:training
cindy:aren't you injured
marth:yeah
cindy:hurry there's no telling when the will come in the room
marth:coming
name unknown:o no you aren't
marth:you wanna fight
name unknown:for that sword yes
marth:ahhhhhh sword slashes
name unknown:haha thats the best you got holding blade in front
marth: sword sparks ahhhhhh sword slashes
name unknown:just as i expected you are the chosen one
marth:who are you?and why shouldn't i cut your head off?
name unknown:im luke.im under orders of the brother hood of steel's order to help you to defeat the king of the shadow realm
marth:why did you attack me?
luke:test how much you have had the sword
marth:what does that mean i haven't had it that long
luke:i mean that depending on how long you had it depends on the strenth limit my analizer has it at 159 such as you've had it for 21 day
marth:i haven't
luke:you've been out cold for some days legend says that a boy will weld a sword against the powerful shadow king known as boss
marth:is it the one with three sticks coming from his head
luke:yeah
marth:better get going
luke:here this is a gift from the brother hood meet me at the marked location after your done
marth:got to go
1 day later
marth: over the brother hood gaunflit im here
luke:go west three steps
marth:ok
luke are you ready
marth:yeah
luke:ok the lift is started
marth:what is this place
luke:this is brother hood of steel base
cindy:wow
luke:code red shadow king is aproching
marth:cindy here that this
cindy:i don't know how to fight
marth:you're going to have to learn
boss:well well if it isn't the chosen one and his friend
marth:this time you die
boss:i killed you once and i can kill you again
cindy:what marth you died
boss:belive it girly
cindy: slashes boss in the face
boss:you have no idea what you broght apon your self
marth: runs in front of cindy you have to kill me first
boss:that fine by me
slam
slam
marth:now you broght friends
boss:c'om you scared
loyal follower of boss:sir his power limit is at 10,000
boss:unbeliveable
marth: double slash
drops
boss:really that all you got you can take on them but can you take down the best
bosses power 100,000
luke:boss you fight a little boy who's only 15 but not a 19 year old like me
boss:his powers high then all of you here
luke:lets see if i can beat you
boss: smirk i'd like to see that happen
luke:if your so confidant then why not fight me and prove it
boss:all talk no fight no wonder your levels so weak
luke:level shoots up to 100,000
boss:thats it ha your a joke
luke:sword clashes with bosses sword*
boss:weak exobeam
luke:level shoots to zero
boss:c'om on weak realmers
after escaping boss
marth:luke's vital sighs are zero
cindy:he's he's
marth:dead
to be continued
marth:uhh where am i
boss:i expected more of a challenge from the chosen one
marth:what
boss:this realm will be destroyed chosen one
marth:ahh slashes with sword
boss:that the best you got lauches destrocto blast
marth:out cold
3 hour later
marth:ah what happened
cindy:i was sent to find you hey you got a marking on your fore head
marth:lets get out of here
cindy:ok
later that day at the hospital
cindy:what are doing
marth:training
cindy:aren't you injured
marth:yeah
cindy:hurry there's no telling when the will come in the room
marth:coming
name unknown:o no you aren't
marth:you wanna fight
name unknown:for that sword yes
marth:ahhhhhh sword slashes
name unknown:haha thats the best you got holding blade in front
marth: sword sparks ahhhhhh sword slashes
name unknown:just as i expected you are the chosen one
marth:who are you?and why shouldn't i cut your head off?
name unknown:im luke.im under orders of the brother hood of steel's order to help you to defeat the king of the shadow realm
marth:why did you attack me?
luke:test how much you have had the sword
marth:what does that mean i haven't had it that long
luke:i mean that depending on how long you had it depends on the strenth limit my analizer has it at 159 such as you've had it for 21 day
marth:i haven't
luke:you've been out cold for some days legend says that a boy will weld a sword against the powerful shadow king known as boss
marth:is it the one with three sticks coming from his head
luke:yeah
marth:better get going
luke:here this is a gift from the brother hood meet me at the marked location after your done
marth:got to go
1 day later
marth: over the brother hood gaunflit im here
luke:go west three steps
marth:ok
luke are you ready
marth:yeah
luke:ok the lift is started
marth:what is this place
luke:this is brother hood of steel base
cindy:wow
luke:code red shadow king is aproching
marth:cindy here that this
cindy:i don't know how to fight
marth:you're going to have to learn
boss:well well if it isn't the chosen one and his friend
marth:this time you die
boss:i killed you once and i can kill you again
cindy:what marth you died
boss:belive it girly
cindy: slashes boss in the face
boss:you have no idea what you broght apon your self
marth: runs in front of cindy you have to kill me first
boss:that fine by me
slam
slam
marth:now you broght friends
boss:c'om you scared
loyal follower of boss:sir his power limit is at 10,000
boss:unbeliveable
marth: double slash
drops
boss:really that all you got you can take on them but can you take down the best
bosses power 100,000
luke:boss you fight a little boy who's only 15 but not a 19 year old like me
boss:his powers high then all of you here
luke:lets see if i can beat you
boss: smirk i'd like to see that happen
luke:if your so confidant then why not fight me and prove it
boss:all talk no fight no wonder your levels so weak
luke:level shoots up to 100,000
boss:thats it ha your a joke
luke:sword clashes with bosses sword*
boss:weak exobeam
luke:level shoots to zero
boss:c'om on weak realmers
after escaping boss
marth:luke's vital sighs are zero
cindy:he's he's
marth:dead
to be continued



10 Comments
The Boss's power is at 10,000? Thats over 9,000!!
x,D
ok random but ok
I'm not sure what this is about, kinda hard to follow..but I think I like it Lol
episode 1 isn't really in the story the others are because theres more people
?
what?
What is this??
broken steel episode 1
I'll pretend I know what Broken Steel is
broken steel is about a 14 year old boy that has to save the world with the help of the brother hood of steel and some friends too but the only way is to kill boss