Another World
Chapter 1
School
"Hello, you still there"?, a hand passed over my eyes. I recognized that voice, it was my best friend Ella's voice.
I stared around myself, i was in the English Class and the class was staring at me. I smiled awkardly at the waiting teacher.
I looked at the black board and nothing come back, i didn't remember the question one bit.
A boy with dark brown hair leaned over slightly and muttered," Four, the answer's four". I nearly looked at the boy, but at that moment my teacher spoke.
"I'm waiting Alanis", Miss Krok raised her bushy eyebrow.
"Um, four, Miss Krok", Miss Krok grited her teeth and replyed with a," yes, very good".
Mrs Krok was always trying to catch me doing something even slightly wrong. She always looked at me with her cruel black eyes, sometimes she spoke right into my ear and her galicly breath wafted over to me. It always caused me to gag on my spit and i'd always end up in a coughing fit.
I leaned over to the boy who'd given me the answer, " thankyou", i muttered under my breath. He looked up and smiled at me. The boy ( or you could call him teenager ) was attractive, he had a slight nose and dazzling blue eyes. He had a thin yet burly form and was half a head taller than me.
"You're welcome", he winked at me and returned his gaze to the teacher.
"Did you doze off again", it was Ella again. She sounded concerned so i turned and assured her i was okay.
"I keep doing that aswell", Said Ella.
"Doing what", i asked her.
"Dozing off, i keep falling asleep", I furrowed my brow in concern at this.
"I don't remember seeing you asleep", she smiled at me," Kim keeps waking me up". She pointed to the red headed Kim, who waved back at us.
"Maybe it's just a slow day", i suggested. I looked at Ella again. She had dark blue eyes that turned dark gray sometimes and she had shoulder length brown hair.
We both had the same thin figure just i was a little taller than her. I had nearly waist length hair and chocolate brown eyes, i had a slightly rounder nose than her and olive coloured skin.
We were also thirteen, fourteen this year.
Just as i'd finished this speculation the school bell rung, signaling the end of the school day. Everyone gathered their things as the teacher began to shout above the noise of homework and upcoming tests.
"Come on, Ella", i hadn't noticed her sleeping a few minutes ago but she was sleeping now. I gently shook her shoulder and she woke with a start.
She laughed out loud and started gathering her things up. "Lets go, before i fall asleep again", she said with a smile.
We walked out of the building and away across the grounds. Lots of people went this way, it lead to the main residential area of South CatchPole.
The boy who'd helped me with the answer was a couple of metres in front of us. He was messing around with his friends, throwing each-others hats in the air and ruffling their hair.
A cloud covered the sun as we entered the small forest seperating the school and town from each-other. i looked up at the advancing clouds, they were nearly black.
"Thinks it's gonna rain", i asked Ella. She looked up at the sky and nodded then added," definitely".
I smiled at her," You look dead tired, bet you can't wait to get home". She did really look exsausted. Her head was sagging and her eyes drooping.
She went to reply but a series of high-pitched scream rent the air. Everyone looked to the source, a girl from my maths class was hugging a friend and screaming repeatedly.
Everyone ran over to see what the issue was, ecept for those who were already twenty metres away.
Ella and I made our way though the crowd the where the girl was still screaming.
Then we saw it." It's just a possum ", someone said. " Overeation ", another muttered. They were dissapointed, well the boys were, the girls were relieved and annoyed.
the girl was being calmed down now by four other friends.
"What, what is it", a boy of eleven asked, he had light blonde hair and turquoise eyes.
"Nothing, just a -", i was cut short, for the ground had disappeared and I was falling along with twenty other people into blackness.
I saw Ella beside me and other children above, besides and below. At that moment i remebered to scream, other's were already screaming. I let out a blood-chilling scream to ease my burden.
But as i started i landed face-first on what felt like dead leafs.
If you like my story please comment. I apprectiate spelling corrections, but please not too harse, it's my first story.
I stared around myself, i was in the English Class and the class was staring at me. I smiled awkardly at the waiting teacher.
I looked at the black board and nothing come back, i didn't remember the question one bit.
A boy with dark brown hair leaned over slightly and muttered," Four, the answer's four". I nearly looked at the boy, but at that moment my teacher spoke.
"I'm waiting Alanis", Miss Krok raised her bushy eyebrow.
"Um, four, Miss Krok", Miss Krok grited her teeth and replyed with a," yes, very good".
Mrs Krok was always trying to catch me doing something even slightly wrong. She always looked at me with her cruel black eyes, sometimes she spoke right into my ear and her galicly breath wafted over to me. It always caused me to gag on my spit and i'd always end up in a coughing fit.
I leaned over to the boy who'd given me the answer, " thankyou", i muttered under my breath. He looked up and smiled at me. The boy ( or you could call him teenager ) was attractive, he had a slight nose and dazzling blue eyes. He had a thin yet burly form and was half a head taller than me.
"You're welcome", he winked at me and returned his gaze to the teacher.
"Did you doze off again", it was Ella again. She sounded concerned so i turned and assured her i was okay.
"I keep doing that aswell", Said Ella.
"Doing what", i asked her.
"Dozing off, i keep falling asleep", I furrowed my brow in concern at this.
"I don't remember seeing you asleep", she smiled at me," Kim keeps waking me up". She pointed to the red headed Kim, who waved back at us.
"Maybe it's just a slow day", i suggested. I looked at Ella again. She had dark blue eyes that turned dark gray sometimes and she had shoulder length brown hair.
We both had the same thin figure just i was a little taller than her. I had nearly waist length hair and chocolate brown eyes, i had a slightly rounder nose than her and olive coloured skin.
We were also thirteen, fourteen this year.
Just as i'd finished this speculation the school bell rung, signaling the end of the school day. Everyone gathered their things as the teacher began to shout above the noise of homework and upcoming tests.
"Come on, Ella", i hadn't noticed her sleeping a few minutes ago but she was sleeping now. I gently shook her shoulder and she woke with a start.
She laughed out loud and started gathering her things up. "Lets go, before i fall asleep again", she said with a smile.
We walked out of the building and away across the grounds. Lots of people went this way, it lead to the main residential area of South CatchPole.
The boy who'd helped me with the answer was a couple of metres in front of us. He was messing around with his friends, throwing each-others hats in the air and ruffling their hair.
A cloud covered the sun as we entered the small forest seperating the school and town from each-other. i looked up at the advancing clouds, they were nearly black.
"Thinks it's gonna rain", i asked Ella. She looked up at the sky and nodded then added," definitely".
I smiled at her," You look dead tired, bet you can't wait to get home". She did really look exsausted. Her head was sagging and her eyes drooping.
She went to reply but a series of high-pitched scream rent the air. Everyone looked to the source, a girl from my maths class was hugging a friend and screaming repeatedly.
Everyone ran over to see what the issue was, ecept for those who were already twenty metres away.
Ella and I made our way though the crowd the where the girl was still screaming.
Then we saw it." It's just a possum ", someone said. " Overeation ", another muttered. They were dissapointed, well the boys were, the girls were relieved and annoyed.
the girl was being calmed down now by four other friends.
"What, what is it", a boy of eleven asked, he had light blonde hair and turquoise eyes.
"Nothing, just a -", i was cut short, for the ground had disappeared and I was falling along with twenty other people into blackness.
I saw Ella beside me and other children above, besides and below. At that moment i remebered to scream, other's were already screaming. I let out a blood-chilling scream to ease my burden.
But as i started i landed face-first on what felt like dead leafs.
If you like my story please comment. I apprectiate spelling corrections, but please not too harse, it's my first story.



23 Comments
Whoooo hooooo go Alanis!! You did me justice, you know me so well. You really are talented and I cant wait or more!! ^_^
thankyou Ella, :) glad you liked it.
I LOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEED IT!! ^_^
Awesome! Although I sound like a bit of a sook :/... ah well. Great story Alanis!
Sorry Ella, didn't mean to. Don't worry you won't be a sook.
Hey, great story was wondering if I could be in the story. If I can please ge back to me ASAP so I can give you an insight.
sure, you can be in it :)
Hey It's cool! I love the story write more!
I am sick of saying this but.... this is AMAZING!!! Please I can't wait for more!!
More! Mooooooooooore! MORE!!! Please plllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssseeeeee!!! Write more I WANNA know MORE!!!
WOW! Just WOW!!! This is sooooo good! And I love the Elves! Please write super SUPER quickly!!!
AWESOME. So the storyteller / bard is my 'father'???
Sorry i mispelled it was supposed to be 'story eyed elf', i'll correct it.
Sorry i mispelled it was supposed to be 'stomy eyed elf', i'll correct it.
Darn, what's wrong with me "stormy". Tell me if I mispelled. :|
Cool please write more I can't wit to find out more about my character!