Determination
A poem I wrote not to long ago about Determination. Plz read :3
The sorrow of ones heart cannot easily be fixed or repaired
It usually stays broken, torn up, and despaired
But there is always one hope, one light
That can help them see the sun shining bright
The one that can help them run around cheerfully again
Is none other than ones determination
Giving up seems easy and less hurtful
But will bring you the most pain of all
To feel better, relieved, you must look deep within
Find your strength, never give in
And let yourself shine
It usually stays broken, torn up, and despaired
But there is always one hope, one light
That can help them see the sun shining bright
The one that can help them run around cheerfully again
Is none other than ones determination
Giving up seems easy and less hurtful
But will bring you the most pain of all
To feel better, relieved, you must look deep within
Find your strength, never give in
And let yourself shine
6 Comments
cool i lik it probably the first poem ive read on quibblo and it was awesome!
thnxxxxx :3
Wow, who knew you were such a poet eh? its good :)
like this one two
thnx!! :3
i like it :)