love, lost and lust.
hey this is a day dream i had, i thought id write it down, cuz day dreams like this seem to always come true. oka. ive changed the names of the ppl, only cuz most of this is true. but now ive kept it the same.
sorry guys in it, i just ended up leaving it the same. i hope u dont mind.
Chapter 11
Looking around Sydney
I went one way while Nick went around the other, we met up again at star city and told each other wat we found. Nick went first saying he couldnt find anything, i went next and said i found a lot of blood in one place then a car with a body, i dont know whose body, but someones. we ran back to where i saw it and found the car again.
once we arrived we saw that the cops had found it and decided to investigate. they had the body out of the car and on a hospital bed, the blood was so much. i found that if we tried to get closer it wouldnt work. i tried to get as close as i could but the cops kept pushing me back. so i was sneaky enough to bribe one into letting me see the body. he lifted the sheet and i saw her.
i know its a short one guys but its going to be better the next time round. i sware
once we arrived we saw that the cops had found it and decided to investigate. they had the body out of the car and on a hospital bed, the blood was so much. i found that if we tried to get closer it wouldnt work. i tried to get as close as i could but the cops kept pushing me back. so i was sneaky enough to bribe one into letting me see the body. he lifted the sheet and i saw her.
i know its a short one guys but its going to be better the next time round. i sware



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tts sweet :)
thnx and thats just the prolouge
more
sorrz taz
send me an invite when the next chapater is done plzz
oka will do
can you send me an invite?
it looks really great.
youre off to a really great start.
:)
oka will do
would it be 2 much trouble 2 write some more i like this story :D
ill write it in the morning
haha sorry but could u plzz right more plzzzzz :D
i just did
Annie here!!! Pls write up chapter 5!!! -whines- I was getting into the mood of reading it..
im writing it now annie.
amazingly awesome :D
yh i no, and its not fun
beautiful T . T lol
thnx, the guy i was talking about, Nick, thats my boyfriend. and some of this has happen. sort of. hahahaha
Aha, love it. I mostly come here for the stories, and this is one of the best. Loved it :)