Poem # 1
This is my first Poem. Hope you understand what I'm saying and feeling in this poem. Sorry if it's too short and if it's confusing. This poem reflects how I felt at that moment. If you don't understand it I will tell you that It means every time i feel like i've accomplished something someones words always seems to negate that accomplishment and the words hurt more than the physical pain i described even though Im hurt I keep going because that's all I kno how to do.
Tell me why every time I fall I get up.
I feel the rush of
Emotions fill me and I
Die inside and out. I'm
Down already so why keep kicking me?
On the floor bloody,hurt,and brused.
Why? oh why? must I still stand up?
Now I've risen back up only to fall again.
I feel the rush of
Emotions fill me and I
Die inside and out. I'm
Down already so why keep kicking me?
On the floor bloody,hurt,and brused.
Why? oh why? must I still stand up?
Now I've risen back up only to fall again.
3 Comments
that is the saddest poem i read but i still like the poem :)
saddest as in emotional?
(: i liked the emotion behind them...very strong!!! please write more