My Poem Book....
People say Im good at writing poems & I get stuff in my mind so when I do I'll might put it in this book.....
Comment PLZ!!!!!!!
Love.
People always make a big deal of it.
I promised myself I wouln't fall into the trap.
Though I knew I couldnt.
It wasnt even a choice.
I tried to fight it.
But I lost.
Now Im in the bitter-sweet trap.
A game really.
Not one I wanted to play.
Is it even love?
Do I know?
Do I even care?
Am I too scared to admit,
If its true or not?
Answers?
I need some.
I think to myself,
What the heck is the matter with you.
All these unwanted thoughts,
Unexplained emotions,
I want him dead.
The person whos smile is my joy,
The one who set my heart in motion,
The one that my thoughts are always on,
The one who accepts me for myself.
He just might pay for that.
Love.
Not for me.
I realize,
Known,
Thought,
For a long time.
Is it me,
Or does this sound dangerous.
January 23, 2011
People always make a big deal of it.
I promised myself I wouln't fall into the trap.
Though I knew I couldnt.
It wasnt even a choice.
I tried to fight it.
But I lost.
Now Im in the bitter-sweet trap.
A game really.
Not one I wanted to play.
Is it even love?
Do I know?
Do I even care?
Am I too scared to admit,
If its true or not?
Answers?
I need some.
I think to myself,
What the heck is the matter with you.
All these unwanted thoughts,
Unexplained emotions,
I want him dead.
The person whos smile is my joy,
The one who set my heart in motion,
The one that my thoughts are always on,
The one who accepts me for myself.
He just might pay for that.
Love.
Not for me.
I realize,
Known,
Thought,
For a long time.
Is it me,
Or does this sound dangerous.
January 23, 2011
16 Comments
I love this poem! But don't you think wanting him dead is a bit harsh? You're the one who told me how much you like Christian. I think it would put a gap in your realtionship if he died. :-)
y chaun, did u really hav to put his name. but anyways, this is all ur freakin fault! U shouldnt hav told him i liked him! curse you!
These are really good!
Thanks.
Oh my gosh. These are the best poems I've ever seen!!!!!! They're sooooo good. You HAVE to make more!! :D
omg hats off to u
i loved every line of the poems
and yeah if u write more pliz just message me because this is just awesome/hectic n stuff
lol
i really liked it good job and write more
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These poems are really good
You are actually good at this. keep it up,nice work:)
i like 'our of control' it expresses alot of me religion :)
Uhmayzing(:
I love all your poems cause they can teach people something. My fave is the last one! :D