you ever wonder what it would be like to wake up and realize you have an alternate personality?
this is my story. pretty much a slightly fictionalized biography... comment, rate, whatever makes you happy. ^.-
haterz not welcome. leave the stupid at the door.
"...im sorry, i just cant be with you anymore." josh mumbled nervously, kicking at the dirt.
"why? did i do something wrong?"Jake asked, his black eyes taking in the figure before him, his downcast moss-green eyes, his unruly mop of dark brown hair, his caramel-colored skin, his petite frame wreathed in black cloth.
"n-no! its.... its not you... i just.... i dont know what happened... i don't love you..i dont think..."he looked up slightly as he said this, "i don't think i ever did..." he looked back down, probably unable to take the anguish in my eyes."people said it was just a phase, and that i couldnt possibly be gay, or id have realized it sooner.. i think.... i think they were right."he said, his voice but a whisper.
as i analyzed him standing before me, rejecting me, something inside me snapped. i crushing the growing despair that began to consume me.
"why? did i do something wrong?"Jake asked, his black eyes taking in the figure before him, his downcast moss-green eyes, his unruly mop of dark brown hair, his caramel-colored skin, his petite frame wreathed in black cloth.
"n-no! its.... its not you... i just.... i dont know what happened... i don't love you..i dont think..."he looked up slightly as he said this, "i don't think i ever did..." he looked back down, probably unable to take the anguish in my eyes."people said it was just a phase, and that i couldnt possibly be gay, or id have realized it sooner.. i think.... i think they were right."he said, his voice but a whisper.
as i analyzed him standing before me, rejecting me, something inside me snapped. i crushing the growing despair that began to consume me.
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wow this is actually really good...it may be short but you put more than enough feeling in it I'd really like to see more
Great, it made me cry actually
That was very well written. I've had that happen to me before.
this is really good.
i can just imagine........
its short and good :)
are you going to make more?
i u r then make them soon :D
Wow...I rarely read anything with this much depth your an astounding writer all I can say is never stop it would be a waste to a wonderful talent.
This is so sad! But really good!
wow that was amazing. so sad but so great. :D
wow that seems so real. write heaps more because that was just amazing!!!!!