As Your Voice Fades:Poem
She's my angel. Comments anyone?
Chapter 1
As Your Voice Fades
Looking at her bathroom mirror she bites her nails and index finger
The same haunting voice is speaking to her again it lingers..
Her eyes are swollen from all the endless crying and her face has become pale
The voice carries on and says 'you..fail..'
You Fail
You Fail
You Fail!!!!
The constant whispers are forcing her to point the gun to her head
With quivering legs and shaky hands she glances at herself again instead
Thinking to herself she says When did my life become a blur
She just cannot remember what has happened to her
The voice in her head begins again, this is the last call ' just end it all'
Just End it all
Just End it all
Just end it all!!!
She scribbles a short note on the sink in blood that says:
I may not have gotten things my way.But at least I have gotten a chance to go away.I'm sorry but today was the perfect day.
She cries as she angrily pulls the trigger, rest in peace my darling.
The same haunting voice is speaking to her again it lingers..
Her eyes are swollen from all the endless crying and her face has become pale
The voice carries on and says 'you..fail..'
You Fail
You Fail
You Fail!!!!
The constant whispers are forcing her to point the gun to her head
With quivering legs and shaky hands she glances at herself again instead
Thinking to herself she says When did my life become a blur
She just cannot remember what has happened to her
The voice in her head begins again, this is the last call ' just end it all'
Just End it all
Just End it all
Just end it all!!!
She scribbles a short note on the sink in blood that says:
I may not have gotten things my way.But at least I have gotten a chance to go away.I'm sorry but today was the perfect day.
She cries as she angrily pulls the trigger, rest in peace my darling.



13 Comments
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O.o wow... just Wow.... OwO that was Awesome.
im crying now! that was so good!!!
That was really good. Im like speachless.
Sweet & sad!!
But, suicide is never the way!
Lovely poem!!
great poem but really sad
that is soo good and so sad. It was so good and i know cause it made me cry. Im gonna tell all my friends in school about this cause its awesome. keep writing.
...wow... that was strongly emotional!!!!
...wow... that was strongly emotional!!!!
That was really really beautiful and very sad