Ever After...NOT!!!!
This is the untold stories of some well known Fairytale Girls, who've changed from the stories we know so well!
The stories are set 5 years after what happens in the original stories! Hope you enjoy this twisted fairytale & comment, please!!
SugarKart is Red Hood; Lnyx_Minx is Aurora; Sonicxrules is Goldilocks; kewlgirls is Snow White; Simmo123 is Gretel; thehamster is Alice; XneonstrawberriX is the Ballerina Doll; prettystranger is Rapunzel; And paramore789 is Belle!
Everyone knows the story of Little Red Riding Hood, but not what happened 5 years later! So, I'll tell ya my story!
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My Grandma was sick, so mum asked me to go & give her some medicine. I loved the woods & my new boyfriend, Hansel. He was tall & handsome, Gretels' brother. I looked at him & smiled.
He smiled back. "So, is your Granny nice?" he asked, holding my hand.
"Very" I grinned, moving closer. "She'll just love you"
I looked around the woods, my grin fading abit. I knew he was there some where. Those glowing green eyes & silver fur. He was there, always there. Hansel gripped my hand harder & I looked at him.
"What's wrong?" he whispered.
"Oh" I said, laughing. "I was just thinking of something that happened long ago."
We walked for about 3 minutes more before Grannys house came into veiw. A small, white cottage with round windows & ivy growing up the walls. I loved this house & the woods, but my 10 year old memory was much unloved. Hansel knocked on the door & the door swung open. I peered in & approached the bed. No wolf, just my granny.
"How is my grandchild?" she croaked, smiling. "And who is this?"
"This is Hansel" I smiled back. "Hansel, this is Granny"
"How do you do?" he grinned, shaking her hand.
"Oh, I'm fine now" she replied, croakily.
We chatted for a while & I made tea & arranged her medicine. Hansel escorted her to the table & we sat down for tea & biscuits. I'd never felt so relaxed before. I glanced at Granny & Hansel: both chattering about the woods & about how good I can make tea. I smiled, getting up, & walked over to the window.
What I saw made me drop my cup & bolt for the open door! He was here...And he wanted REVENGE
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My Grandma was sick, so mum asked me to go & give her some medicine. I loved the woods & my new boyfriend, Hansel. He was tall & handsome, Gretels' brother. I looked at him & smiled.
He smiled back. "So, is your Granny nice?" he asked, holding my hand.
"Very" I grinned, moving closer. "She'll just love you"
I looked around the woods, my grin fading abit. I knew he was there some where. Those glowing green eyes & silver fur. He was there, always there. Hansel gripped my hand harder & I looked at him.
"What's wrong?" he whispered.
"Oh" I said, laughing. "I was just thinking of something that happened long ago."
We walked for about 3 minutes more before Grannys house came into veiw. A small, white cottage with round windows & ivy growing up the walls. I loved this house & the woods, but my 10 year old memory was much unloved. Hansel knocked on the door & the door swung open. I peered in & approached the bed. No wolf, just my granny.
"How is my grandchild?" she croaked, smiling. "And who is this?"
"This is Hansel" I smiled back. "Hansel, this is Granny"
"How do you do?" he grinned, shaking her hand.
"Oh, I'm fine now" she replied, croakily.
We chatted for a while & I made tea & arranged her medicine. Hansel escorted her to the table & we sat down for tea & biscuits. I'd never felt so relaxed before. I glanced at Granny & Hansel: both chattering about the woods & about how good I can make tea. I smiled, getting up, & walked over to the window.
What I saw made me drop my cup & bolt for the open door! He was here...And he wanted REVENGE
21 Comments
Awesome story!
Anyone writing the next chapter, ask!!
Here's the rules:
1. The stories are set 5 years after the original stories!
2. Try to spell correctly & use correct puctuation (not picky, but please try! ^_^)
3. Have fun!
Enjoy the story! And comments are gladly read & needed!!! LOL
Um.. not to be rude but.. how to you write a chapter?
Oops I said to you.. not do you. Lol.
that was awesome
That was great! I'll write the next chapter if u want! ^-^ :})
I'll write a chapter anytime!
Awesome!
When will the next chapter come out?
Dunno, I past it to thehamster!!
I'll write the chapter after thehamster!
REVENGE!!!!!!!
Looks like a really good story. Can't wait to read next chapter!