Love has a back door. part 1
What if ................Love found you .
Chapter 1
days never end well
I walked into class to see Amy my best friend waiting to ask me something. I knew what it was.
"Fi" she said Fi is what everyone calls me it short for Fiona."you are going to tell me who you like!"
"Amy you know i don't like anyone." I put my stuff down.
"PLEASE" she begged
I looked at her. "FINE I won't ask"she said " You need a Boyfriend just give love a chance"
" Amy I am a happy 14 year old single and HAPPY"
"Fine"
Shawn a guy in my class who is I mean I have mixed feelings about could to someone be cute. He and I have known each other since 4th grade. He bugs me how i have never had a boyfriend.
Me and him were stuck after school at after care.
"Fi" , he said, "why won't your mom let you go out"
"Shawn I've told you many times and I will still not tell you"
all the sudden we heard a gun shot. I stood up/
"Stay here" he said
I wasn't going to Listen i followed him. I saw a armed gun man and he saw us We shut the cafeteria doors quick and locked then. "What was that?' I asked
He shrugged. "Was Miss Quinn in the office" he asked me.
I looked at him "Yes, she was" i said scaredly. " Oh my Gosh the guy shot her he is after us now." I looked straight ahead for a minute. I started to panic. I started to cry. " Hey you kids" a strange voice said. " Lets talk about what u saw" I looked at shawn. I shook my head. "NO" said Shawn, " You killed our teacher"
"So theres more then one of you in there. Well you'll be gone soon." the man said.
'what" i said quietly. We heard the man's foot steps and him dialing a phone.
"Guess we are stuck here" Shawn said
"Yup"
"Fi" she said Fi is what everyone calls me it short for Fiona."you are going to tell me who you like!"
"Amy you know i don't like anyone." I put my stuff down.
"PLEASE" she begged
I looked at her. "FINE I won't ask"she said " You need a Boyfriend just give love a chance"
" Amy I am a happy 14 year old single and HAPPY"
"Fine"
Shawn a guy in my class who is I mean I have mixed feelings about could to someone be cute. He and I have known each other since 4th grade. He bugs me how i have never had a boyfriend.
Me and him were stuck after school at after care.
"Fi" , he said, "why won't your mom let you go out"
"Shawn I've told you many times and I will still not tell you"
all the sudden we heard a gun shot. I stood up/
"Stay here" he said
I wasn't going to Listen i followed him. I saw a armed gun man and he saw us We shut the cafeteria doors quick and locked then. "What was that?' I asked
He shrugged. "Was Miss Quinn in the office" he asked me.
I looked at him "Yes, she was" i said scaredly. " Oh my Gosh the guy shot her he is after us now." I looked straight ahead for a minute. I started to panic. I started to cry. " Hey you kids" a strange voice said. " Lets talk about what u saw" I looked at shawn. I shook my head. "NO" said Shawn, " You killed our teacher"
"So theres more then one of you in there. Well you'll be gone soon." the man said.
'what" i said quietly. We heard the man's foot steps and him dialing a phone.
"Guess we are stuck here" Shawn said
"Yup"



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Ok People Sorry It's a little dull it's like 1 am I promise it will get a whole lot BETTER!
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its really good, but there are many a time when a comma is needed. OTHERWISE, KEPP WRITING!