Gone with the wind. (sneak peak)
This is the first couple paragraphs from the new story I am writing. Please tell me what you think. Thanks XOXOX :3
Chapter 1
Sneak peak
She openned her eyes, knowing that this could be the day she will see her father again after he died. She was wishing and hopeing. That is all she has wanted to do for the last 10 years. Is die, and see her father.
Her father has been dead for about 10 years, he died from drug abuse. Over duce.
It was 9:30 am when she called me.
"I may have only been 2 when he died. But I still miss him and I knew he was my father." She told me before.
Sitting there. I wondered if she knew what she was saying. She was 2. I don't remeber anything from when I was 2. How can she? She is 12. I'm 14.
Her father has been dead for about 10 years, he died from drug abuse. Over duce.
It was 9:30 am when she called me.
"I may have only been 2 when he died. But I still miss him and I knew he was my father." She told me before.
Sitting there. I wondered if she knew what she was saying. She was 2. I don't remeber anything from when I was 2. How can she? She is 12. I'm 14.



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