My 17th Year Poetry
these are the poems i have written since my 17th birthday. some dont flow. others i believe are good. please comment with your views. constructive criticism would be appreciated
clock goes tick, watches go tock
but still the teens like their rock
music is said to be their passion
the one undying youth's fashion
music is their life they say
the one true way to live
the only thing i want to play
the only thing to always give
"rock on, rock on" they shout and scream
their masks stripped off, wild and free
its like im watching, as if a dream
music is truly real, always will be
but still the teens like their rock
music is said to be their passion
the one undying youth's fashion
music is their life they say
the one true way to live
the only thing i want to play
the only thing to always give
"rock on, rock on" they shout and scream
their masks stripped off, wild and free
its like im watching, as if a dream
music is truly real, always will be
1 Comment
great poems