Please come back! (a poem)
soo i wrote this during school..tell me what you think.
You helped me so much
but i ordered you away
you didnt leave willingly
but my mother wanted you out
they didnt believe
the power you held over me
they thoguht it was no big deal
we'll see what they say
when i summon you home
If i can
ill do whatever it takes
for you to rule me again
I miss your..support
you made me happy
my family made me sad
they didnt believe in you
I never should have tried
it ruined everything
i can feel it happening
the deppresion sinking in
i reached for the knife
but i couldnt do it
i need you back
Please!
no one will know
Please!
but i ordered you away
you didnt leave willingly
but my mother wanted you out
they didnt believe
the power you held over me
they thoguht it was no big deal
we'll see what they say
when i summon you home
If i can
ill do whatever it takes
for you to rule me again
I miss your..support
you made me happy
my family made me sad
they didnt believe in you
I never should have tried
it ruined everything
i can feel it happening
the deppresion sinking in
i reached for the knife
but i couldnt do it
i need you back
Please!
no one will know
Please!
6 Comments
awww it sounds sweet
this is really good
No one is ever born into Life alone. Everyone has shared the bond of family, at least at birth, and for many people it is a bond that will follow them throughout life. For many people it is the most important bond of all.
wait are you back with him? cause if he makes you happy im happy for you to
Its back.
just fyi..this is about my eating disorder. which i am now in treatment for...