love story gone wrong
idk y but i waz dreaming of this and 1 charactor is real hes kind of a friend and well the main character is me
Chapter 1
emo love and goth love
my friend came over on saturday morening i waz still in my night cloths when she knocked at the door the knock waz so lould in my quite house she asked if i wanted to go 2 the school even though she waz laughing at how i looked i told her shut up and ok let me get dressed so before i left i got my phone and mp3 i had 2 ask my mom if i could go 2 the park with my friend she said fine when we left we turned on my mp3 and waz listening to 1 song over and over we sat down on a slide and sat their not really tlkin mostly singing when i felt some 1 pull my foot i look down their waz the hottest emo dude ive ever seen and when i looked down there waz a guy under the slide hitting the slide making my friend scared i told her look down when she saw the guy she laughed we both where thinking he waz the 2nd hottest emo guy the cute emo guy who waz pulling my foot asked me if i wanted 2 go out i waz like sure in my mind i waz so exited but on the outside i waz all come the 2nd guy didnt ask my friend out thats cuz they where best friends when they left the boy who pulled my leg came up and sat right next to me we started listneing 2 my mp3 he ask if i had black veil brides on it im like yea do u like the song perfect weapon he says i love that song we started saying all about the black veil brides once we stopped he asked me if i wanted 2 go 2 the bayou with him i told him sure it waz always so buetifuel on these types of days so we raced 2 the fence of course i beat him 2 the fence and we got over about almost the same time we sat kinda close 2 the water we sat and stared 4 awhile listnein 2 music he looked at me and smiled i kinda laughed at him then he leaned in 2 kiss me we kissed for about 5secs and pulled back when we went back 2 kiss he pulled me on his lap we kissed a little longer intil he whisperd me something so low i couldnt hear i said what?he said u heard me suck my beep at first i thought he waz kidding when i saw the look on his face i knew he ment it i told him no but he just kept telling me 2 do it i finally got tired of it and said no i just mouthed shut up ok he told me never say that 2 me again and just suck my beep of course i ran after i slapped him i tryed running as fast as i could i beat him i waz on the top of the slide when he waz half way their i told him 2 leave me alone but of couse he didnt he just sat next 2 me and said he waz srry he didnt know wat happend 2 him right then i said ok some reason beleaving him .once i said ok he kissed me slowly and backed up when he said he loved me i thought i had heard him unzip his pants so i looked down i saw him unzipping then i looked up at him he just smiled at me then all of the sudden he just pushes me down the slide he goes down the slide and lands on top of me i just kept yelling and yelling 4 him 2 get off me them i heard foot steps running fast torwards us i waz kinda scared itd be my parents i waz so happy it waznt it waz my best friend he pushed the guy off him and started punching him then the emo guy punched my friend in the same spot 3 times he had a huge black eye but he didnt care he punched the guy i time in the stumache and he just fell down i looked at my friend happy but sad cuz of his eye he told me dont worry about my eye but wat waz this all about i told him the entire story and he just looked at me sad shaking his head in a dissaprovel way im like i know i know i messed up big time he told me um did he really hurt u by doing that i told him yea he pushed me down a slide and landed on me wouldnt u think that would hurt hes like well yea but anyways lets get u home so u dont have 2 see him any more so we went 2 his house 4 awhile we where sitting on his bed tryin 2 make up an excuse 2 tell my mom why i got a black eye he asked me any ways howd he give u a black eye when he landed down lower on u i told him because he waz aming 4 my mouth but instead he hit me in the eye
hes like um ok weiod but oh well instead of makin up an exuse lets just cover it up with make up i waz laughing when i said u have make up he told me yea if i get into fights and i dont want 2 tell my mom wat happen i just put that on and she doesnt notice im like ok wat ever i dont feel like getting my mom pissed so yea lets go with ur idea so once its all done he told me i look buetifuel with make up i waz like thx and he just smiled at me i said wat he said oh nothing, nothing im like wat ever he said well now lets get u home and u may wanna take this with u im like thx we walked 2 my house when we where on the porch he said weve been friends 4 a long time and ive been wanting 2 tell u this 4 awhile i love u and i want 2 be with u 4 the rest of my life i again thought he waz kidding but when i saw his face i waz so happy he waznt kidding i waz like ok so he kissed me and then my dad came out 2 the porch so i said bye see u in school 2morrow he told me bye that night i couldnt sleep at all i couldnt beleave all that happend 2 day it waz so awsome the next day waz even better every1 already knew we where dateing i waz so surprised but then again i rembered he waz way more popular then me .so after about 5 months after we started dateing me and him went 2 the park i told him ale be right back when i came back about 30mins i found him laying there with a knife through his head with a note that said babe i told u 2 suck my beep and u wouldnt well now u will or ull end up just like him meet me here a week from 2day i ran 1st 2 his house i waz knocking wildly when his mom finally opeand the door 2 find me crying i waz trying so hard 2 stop i just couldnt but i finnaly got the words out she drove 2 the park she started crying then the cops finnally came his body waz take away i waz like what am i supposed 2 do my parents and his mom told me well next week ull have 2 do wat he says the entire wek just sucked 4 me every 1 called me a slute but i didnt really care mostly cuz they where mostly his friends but they where mostly kidding every 1 really felt bad 4 me the day finally came i went 2 the park at 4:00 i sat on the slide waiting he kinda scared me cuz i noticed that he had another guy with him i waz trying 2 see who it waz when they got closer i noticed who they where i freaked out it waz my friend i told my self hes alive then who or wat waz that in the park well i didnt care cuz when i got close enough i ran up and hugged him the emo guy said did u really think i would kill a guy u loved or make u did it with me especally when ur dateing some1 i may be a cruel person 2 most girls but not all the time. i said u know ur better then alot of guys he said thx .but then i remberd wat r u gonna tell th police he said well heres the thing im like what'd u do he said um well every 1 knows about wat really happend and then all of the sudden every1 came out of where they where hideing he kinda smiled an akward smile then the weiodest thing had happend every1 turned into a zebra then i wroke up i was so happy it was just a dream thank gdness
THE END
hes like um ok weiod but oh well instead of makin up an exuse lets just cover it up with make up i waz laughing when i said u have make up he told me yea if i get into fights and i dont want 2 tell my mom wat happen i just put that on and she doesnt notice im like ok wat ever i dont feel like getting my mom pissed so yea lets go with ur idea so once its all done he told me i look buetifuel with make up i waz like thx and he just smiled at me i said wat he said oh nothing, nothing im like wat ever he said well now lets get u home and u may wanna take this with u im like thx we walked 2 my house when we where on the porch he said weve been friends 4 a long time and ive been wanting 2 tell u this 4 awhile i love u and i want 2 be with u 4 the rest of my life i again thought he waz kidding but when i saw his face i waz so happy he waznt kidding i waz like ok so he kissed me and then my dad came out 2 the porch so i said bye see u in school 2morrow he told me bye that night i couldnt sleep at all i couldnt beleave all that happend 2 day it waz so awsome the next day waz even better every1 already knew we where dateing i waz so surprised but then again i rembered he waz way more popular then me .so after about 5 months after we started dateing me and him went 2 the park i told him ale be right back when i came back about 30mins i found him laying there with a knife through his head with a note that said babe i told u 2 suck my beep and u wouldnt well now u will or ull end up just like him meet me here a week from 2day i ran 1st 2 his house i waz knocking wildly when his mom finally opeand the door 2 find me crying i waz trying so hard 2 stop i just couldnt but i finnaly got the words out she drove 2 the park she started crying then the cops finnally came his body waz take away i waz like what am i supposed 2 do my parents and his mom told me well next week ull have 2 do wat he says the entire wek just sucked 4 me every 1 called me a slute but i didnt really care mostly cuz they where mostly his friends but they where mostly kidding every 1 really felt bad 4 me the day finally came i went 2 the park at 4:00 i sat on the slide waiting he kinda scared me cuz i noticed that he had another guy with him i waz trying 2 see who it waz when they got closer i noticed who they where i freaked out it waz my friend i told my self hes alive then who or wat waz that in the park well i didnt care cuz when i got close enough i ran up and hugged him the emo guy said did u really think i would kill a guy u loved or make u did it with me especally when ur dateing some1 i may be a cruel person 2 most girls but not all the time. i said u know ur better then alot of guys he said thx .but then i remberd wat r u gonna tell th police he said well heres the thing im like what'd u do he said um well every 1 knows about wat really happend and then all of the sudden every1 came out of where they where hideing he kinda smiled an akward smile then the weiodest thing had happend every1 turned into a zebra then i wroke up i was so happy it was just a dream thank gdness
THE END



5 Comments
if u think its weiod ik id even k y i just had this as a dream lol
that was really good/
thx
i like it.
that was like, one sentence