Tell me why

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a poem i made..

Chapter 1

Tell me Why

by:

DeathDealerfearme

I thought i could trust you
I thought you would never hurt me
Its haunted me and tortured me ever since
Tell me why please!
Someone!!Anyone!
Just please!
Help me out of this misery!
I wish that you would just leave....
My last breath...
Is because of you...

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7 Comments

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In_Love_With_Chase 02-12-2011 at 12:47 PM 0 0
i like this
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DeathDealerfearme 02-12-2011 at 12:51 PM 0 0
:) thanks
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xJohnny 02-12-2011 at 3:21 PM 0 0
AWZUM!!! :)
tho uhm..........u should try n make it a bit longer x.x
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DeathDealerfearme 02-12-2011 at 3:27 PM 0 0
i know....
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Were_Kutless 02-12-2011 at 3:32 PM 0 0
nice
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Depptastic 02-13-2011 at 12:18 PM 0 0
cool! :)
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LOTRfanatic 02-13-2011 at 3:31 PM 0 0
That's really good! Sad and poetic, and well put together! Good job!!! :)