no words

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this is a story i just made up 14 1/2 seconds ago. hope you like it

Chapter 1

Introduction

by:

joeyjoj

All I remember was falling. Falling from the building. Not committing suicide but just falling. I could feel the air pushing my hair back and the ground coming closer to face. But I wasent falling quickly. It was like I was an angel falling from heaven. As the ground got closer, it was hard to think that I would die because everytime i would think that, something always kept me calm. It was only seconds before I would reach the ground and I didnt know what was going to happen to me. 8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1...

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JulyLovesYa 02-14-2011 at 5:36 PM 0 0
i like it, does it heave a second chapter? :)
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joeyjoj 02-14-2011 at 5:37 PM 0 0
it will but i just want ppl to say what they think about it
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LurvlyMurffins 02-14-2011 at 5:39 PM 0 0
I thinks it's cool!!!! XD
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joeyjoj 02-14-2011 at 5:40 PM 0 0
thank you VERY much
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joeyjoj 02-14-2011 at 5:41 PM 0 0
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MIZ_POTOSINA_ 02-14-2011 at 5:57 PM 0 0
its good it just sounds like a dream i had?
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IT_MAY_BE 02-14-2011 at 6:17 PM 0 0
What suspence! this is VERY good
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GeorgeFreakinWeasley 02-14-2011 at 7:35 PM 0 0
it great plz make ch 2
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GeorgeFreakinWeasley 02-14-2011 at 7:35 PM 0 0
it great plz make ch 2
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Drop_The_World 02-15-2011 at 12:56 AM 0 0
Omg! I love it!!!
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mmmhotgirl 02-15-2011 at 1:56 AM 0 0
Cool its like real poetry noyt the usual crap people try to pass of as poetry 2day
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barbie_tatty 02-15-2011 at 2:13 PM 0 0
cool! i love it! next plz!
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Jennn 02-15-2011 at 2:21 PM 0 0
well NOW i want to know what happens next, don't i!!!!!!!!!