Kiss But Don't Tell (how i fell in love with my brother's Best friend)
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Chapter 1
11 years ago.....
3rd person POV
Sonia Mason quietly watched her 5 year old son Hayden playing with his Navy battle ship.
she was waiting for the arrival of the two young children she promised to watch for a few hours.
their mother was a fellow coworker who seemed awfully nice. so she agreed to the baby sitting.
she was told that the children were both 5. the same age as her beloved son, Hayden.
"are they gonna play soldier with me, momma?" hayden asked. showing her one of his tiny green soldiers. his cute chubby face looked excited with the thought of making new friends.
she smiled. "of course sweetheart." he replied just as the door bell rang.
Sonia stood and went over to the door.
"Nikki!!" its so good to see you!!" sonia exclaimed to her coworker.
"thank you so much Sonia. i hope they wont be a handful. you kow how twins can get." nikki said with an apologetic tone.
sonic shooed her away. "nonsense." these two look like perfect little angles. they will have fun., trust me."
Nikki told her two children goodbye and sonia walked them over towards Hayden.
"look whos here to play with you hay." she said.
hayden whipped his head to look at the two children standing near his mother. one was a boy with deep brown eyes and dark floppy hair.
"is that a navy ship?" the boy asked hayden who grinned. "yep!!" he said proudly and placed the ship in the boys hand.
"whats your name?" hayden asked, picking up one of his army men.
"Ringo." the boy said. then he looked back where a small girl stood, just behind hayden's mother. "and thats my baby sister Randi."
sonia gently pushed Randi from behind. urging her closer to the boys, "dont be shy."
hesitantly, randi took a few steps. Hayden watched her.he had never played with a girl before.
the barbie doll she clung to caught his attention. was that what girl's played with ? he asked himself.
her big brown eyes watched him, waiting for him to make the first move.
so he did. hayden glanced at the tiny soldier in his hand and extended it toward her.
"here."he said, dropping it into her open palm.
Randi began to stare at the little green man in her hand. she looked up at hayden then,
"what is it?" she asked in a quiet voice.
"its a soldier." he answered simply. going back to pick up an airplane.
Randi dropped her doll. joining Hayden and her twin brother in play.
......too bad these three wont be playing like this for long. things change over the years.especially in your teen years. and that is when our story begins. when these three all become 16.
TBC(:
i know its a flash back of before but i need something different!! so tell me if you like it!! AND BE CRITICAL IF YOU HAVE TO. this is a grade xD
****BE SURE TO TAKE MY QUIZ CALLED Kiss But Don't Tell (how i fell in love with my brother's Best friend) IT HAS ALL THE INFO YOU NEED ON MY CHARACTERS(:****
Sonia Mason quietly watched her 5 year old son Hayden playing with his Navy battle ship.
she was waiting for the arrival of the two young children she promised to watch for a few hours.
their mother was a fellow coworker who seemed awfully nice. so she agreed to the baby sitting.
she was told that the children were both 5. the same age as her beloved son, Hayden.
"are they gonna play soldier with me, momma?" hayden asked. showing her one of his tiny green soldiers. his cute chubby face looked excited with the thought of making new friends.
she smiled. "of course sweetheart." he replied just as the door bell rang.
Sonia stood and went over to the door.
"Nikki!!" its so good to see you!!" sonia exclaimed to her coworker.
"thank you so much Sonia. i hope they wont be a handful. you kow how twins can get." nikki said with an apologetic tone.
sonic shooed her away. "nonsense." these two look like perfect little angles. they will have fun., trust me."
Nikki told her two children goodbye and sonia walked them over towards Hayden.
"look whos here to play with you hay." she said.
hayden whipped his head to look at the two children standing near his mother. one was a boy with deep brown eyes and dark floppy hair.
"is that a navy ship?" the boy asked hayden who grinned. "yep!!" he said proudly and placed the ship in the boys hand.
"whats your name?" hayden asked, picking up one of his army men.
"Ringo." the boy said. then he looked back where a small girl stood, just behind hayden's mother. "and thats my baby sister Randi."
sonia gently pushed Randi from behind. urging her closer to the boys, "dont be shy."
hesitantly, randi took a few steps. Hayden watched her.he had never played with a girl before.
the barbie doll she clung to caught his attention. was that what girl's played with ? he asked himself.
her big brown eyes watched him, waiting for him to make the first move.
so he did. hayden glanced at the tiny soldier in his hand and extended it toward her.
"here."he said, dropping it into her open palm.
Randi began to stare at the little green man in her hand. she looked up at hayden then,
"what is it?" she asked in a quiet voice.
"its a soldier." he answered simply. going back to pick up an airplane.
Randi dropped her doll. joining Hayden and her twin brother in play.
......too bad these three wont be playing like this for long. things change over the years.especially in your teen years. and that is when our story begins. when these three all become 16.
TBC(:
i know its a flash back of before but i need something different!! so tell me if you like it!! AND BE CRITICAL IF YOU HAVE TO. this is a grade xD
****BE SURE TO TAKE MY QUIZ CALLED Kiss But Don't Tell (how i fell in love with my brother's Best friend) IT HAS ALL THE INFO YOU NEED ON MY CHARACTERS(:****



450 Comments
I like it n I can't wait for more
loved it ;)
:D aww big brown eyes
I can't wait till the next part
that was ALSOME
It's good
but co-worker should be like this
It's a good plot and written quite well
LOVING THIS TO MUCH!!!
I actually let it all build up because I hate when you take breaks!Because its so addictive this story!
I love all of your stories, so i KNOW this one will be awesome! :)
awesome story cant wait for the nxt one
really good!!
u shud describe wat randi looks like... and ringo... thts a different name lol