Help Meee!!! (plz read intro)

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Aaron has a problem. A serious life or death problem. A problem with slender man....

Ok so I'm not the best at stories i dont think so can you guys tell me how I did? I need to know if I have a writing problem. Oh and if you have any ideas for a title, I would appreciate if someone would give me an idea.

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Chapter 1

Help Me With My Problem!!!

by: Conrad
(Aaron's POV)

I stormed out of the bathroom, my friends laughter still ringing in my ears. "Why do I have to have such pathetic, evil friends? Why do I bother with them anyway?" My mind was about to explode, thinking over what just happened. Unfourtunately, my mind was on my friends, not where I was walking. I hadn't noticed that I was about to walk into a wall, until I did and was picking up my books, rubbing my head where I'd hit it on the wall. Oops.

I heard someone laugh. Wait, no it was a group of someones. I turned around and saw my group of "friends," Jake, Tyler and Brian. "Looks like an overactive imagination isn't the only thing Aaron has a problem with." Jake laughed. Tyler smirked and kicked my stuff, which had exploded out of my binder when I'd crashed and was now scattered across the floor. I glared at him but I didn't get a reaction.

"What, you don't think we're funny?" Brian apparently felt that he should say something, though I wouldn't have minded if he'd just stayed silent. I didn't bother to answer, I just picked up my stuff and put it back in my binder. "My friends are fvcking evil, I can't trust anybody anymore, what happened to my life..." I was muttering stuff under my breath, I didn't realize they could hear me.

"WHAT did you say?!?!?!" Tyler stepped forward, almost right in front of me. He obviously didn't like what I said. He was way too close to me. It was disturbing. I took a step back, tripped on my shoelaces, and fell flat on my back. I sat up slowly and glared at Tyler. Apparently he had stepped on my shoelace so when I'd stepped back, I'd break my head open. Sadly for him, it didn't work.

I groaned because my stuff was all over the floor again. I picked it up, again and glared at them, again. They laughed at me, again and I looked at my still-untied shoes, bent down and tied them. "I need new laces," I thought. It was true. These were falling apart.

"I hate my friends, I'm going insane..." I was talking to myself again. I'll fix that problem later.

"Third period, science. Where is the science classroom? Oh yeah there." I felt ultimately stupid. Science class was the door I'd crashed into earlier. Oops.

I turned around and left my friends standing in the hallway. I hesitated in the doorway and glanced back down the hall and was surprised at what I saw, surprised in a bad way. I spun back around and entered the classroom in a daze. I slid all the way down in my chair and went over what I'd seen in my mind. Down the hall, right where the hall was dark. I saw a figure peeking around the corner. A tall figure in a suit. :It could've been the tenth grade nerd," I'd thought. Until I'd seen that the figure had no face...


ok does anyone have any ideas for what should happen next? I'm not really sure. Help mee!!!

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Conrad
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you dont have to know, MN, US

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