I Really Need Your Opinion Please =)

So there's a story that one of my friend writes and she wanted me to write one small part...
And I did, but I'm not quite sure if it's good enough yet. And I know there are some pretty amazing writers out here so I decided to ask for your opinion. =)
So baisicly the story is about a girl who is as happy as she can be but then her boyfriend gets into a motorcycle accedent and dies...This part is from the funeral and it's the speech of that girl.
Please leave the comments on what you think and If you find spelling errors, please let me know. =)
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I started not sure if everyone can hear me since my regular loud voice had lost it's power. "Kyle...there's not a lot of words...to describe him..." tears started to form in my eyes. "But all there is to find are good. He...was..." I will not get used to using the past form " ...honest...responsible...loving...caring...and all around incredible." a tear rolled down my cheek. "Today...I’m trying to...be strong... 'cause he wouldn’t want me crying...He always...used...to say he didn't want to see me cry" my cheeks were now drenched in salty tears "...but although I'm trying...hard...really hard...God knows...that I can't stop. Today...is a rough day for all of us...We all lost an extraordinary person...friend and a student..." the teachers and his friends from school looked devastated. "...Annie and Will lost amazing son..." I saw and heard Annie break down in loud sobbs as Will pulled her tighter to him. "...And me...I'm just...learning how to handle the fact...that I lost love...I lost a best friend...I lost my angel...I lost Kyle..." I hid my face in my hands and walked back to my seat where my mom pulled me into a tight hug, just like she used to do when I got hurt as a kid. But this time it wasn't a bruised knee...It was my heart.