The Rainbow After The Rain
ok so this is a character from my cupids arrow but im tweekin it an addin to it
hope yu lik
So yu just graduated from high school and was starting college.
Name- FeNoex (phoenix) Age- 19
Personality- Nice,Semi-Athletic,Down To Earth,Short Tempered,Semi Ghetto, Loud When Partyin Hieght- 5'3 Nationality- Black,Mexican, and Puerto Rican Hair- Mid Back, Milk Chocolate w/ Red highlights I THink Thats All you need to Know for now the rest will be explained Comment~~ Kookie Kakes~~
You finally reach your dorm and don’t see anyone "So i get to pick first" yes you thought
You close your eyes and when you hear someone cough. You look up to see a guy with nothing but a towel around his waist looking at you (did i mention the dorm is co-ed?)
He has brown hair and blue eyes at least 6'2 not bad you thought
Thanks, he said
You blush in embracement
Did i just say that out loud? He nodded his head yes
I’m Michael by the way, he said.
Ooo I’m FeNoex.
FeNoex, cute name.
Thanks.
You start to unpack when a girl walked in.
"This is what you dumped me for" your eyes widened
Excuse Me!!!!!?????
She starts walking toward you but Michael stops her and says" umm this is my new roommate FeNoex and no that’s not why. You barging in here like you just did is why. You don’t ever give me any space! After that she runs out
I’m sorry about that, he says after a few moments of silence
You’re in shock and staring at da door
Mike- FeNoex hello earth to FeNoex you finally snap out of it
Umm yea what was that bout?
Mike-well that was my girlfriend well my ex-girlfriend Jennifer I just broke up with her yesterday
-Ooo…. ok so which bed is yours you say trying to change the subject
Mike- umm i really don’t care
You picked the 1 farthest away from da door just in case she came back. You look over and notice he is still just in a towel. After noticing what you were looking at he rushed into the bathroom. He comes back out with a black wife beater and some basketball shorts. You could see every definition of his muscles
-umm so mike, you play any sports? You say breaking out of the trance you were stuck in
Mike- yea track n football what bout you
-really I’m n track but i love football
He looks at you like your crazy
- What?
Mike- I haven’t ever met a girl that liked football. Who’s your team?
-The cardinals of course
Mike- what!! They suck! You chuckle
- Um no they don’t. Who’s yours?
Mike-stealers
- What?! Omg heck no! I can’t live here with a stealers fan! you say jokingly
Yu look deep into his eyes they were the first thing to catch your breath wen you noticed him
- Well…… I need to get unpacked.
Mike- yea umm you need any help
- Sure let me put this little bit away then we can get the rest of my stuff out my truck. He helps you put your stuff away and you guys walk back to your truck. He stops when he noticed your truck.
- are you ok? He was just standing there with his mouth open.
Mike- umm yea lol nice truck
- I know it isn't a lot but hey it gets me around
Mike- what are you talking about this is Amazing
I really didn’t think it was that good it was a black Ford F150. I just stood there and smiled. wow I’m going to like it here
what FeNoex is wearing- http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=39982132
pic of micheal- http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_images/L/LO/LOZ/LOZ4444/1253482352_2679_full.jpeg
You close your eyes and when you hear someone cough. You look up to see a guy with nothing but a towel around his waist looking at you (did i mention the dorm is co-ed?)
He has brown hair and blue eyes at least 6'2 not bad you thought
Thanks, he said
You blush in embracement
Did i just say that out loud? He nodded his head yes
I’m Michael by the way, he said.
Ooo I’m FeNoex.
FeNoex, cute name.
Thanks.
You start to unpack when a girl walked in.
"This is what you dumped me for" your eyes widened
Excuse Me!!!!!?????
She starts walking toward you but Michael stops her and says" umm this is my new roommate FeNoex and no that’s not why. You barging in here like you just did is why. You don’t ever give me any space! After that she runs out
I’m sorry about that, he says after a few moments of silence
You’re in shock and staring at da door
Mike- FeNoex hello earth to FeNoex you finally snap out of it
Umm yea what was that bout?
Mike-well that was my girlfriend well my ex-girlfriend Jennifer I just broke up with her yesterday
-Ooo…. ok so which bed is yours you say trying to change the subject
Mike- umm i really don’t care
You picked the 1 farthest away from da door just in case she came back. You look over and notice he is still just in a towel. After noticing what you were looking at he rushed into the bathroom. He comes back out with a black wife beater and some basketball shorts. You could see every definition of his muscles
-umm so mike, you play any sports? You say breaking out of the trance you were stuck in
Mike- yea track n football what bout you
-really I’m n track but i love football
He looks at you like your crazy
- What?
Mike- I haven’t ever met a girl that liked football. Who’s your team?
-The cardinals of course
Mike- what!! They suck! You chuckle
- Um no they don’t. Who’s yours?
Mike-stealers
- What?! Omg heck no! I can’t live here with a stealers fan! you say jokingly
Yu look deep into his eyes they were the first thing to catch your breath wen you noticed him
- Well…… I need to get unpacked.
Mike- yea umm you need any help
- Sure let me put this little bit away then we can get the rest of my stuff out my truck. He helps you put your stuff away and you guys walk back to your truck. He stops when he noticed your truck.
- are you ok? He was just standing there with his mouth open.
Mike- umm yea lol nice truck
- I know it isn't a lot but hey it gets me around
Mike- what are you talking about this is Amazing
I really didn’t think it was that good it was a black Ford F150. I just stood there and smiled. wow I’m going to like it here
what FeNoex is wearing- http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=39982132
pic of micheal- http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_images/L/LO/LOZ/LOZ4444/1253482352_2679_full.jpeg
7 Comments
very good!nxt plz
I liked the story, and I am NOT trying to be rude, but it was kind of hard to read. If you would edit it it would be easier. Or, if you want to send me the stuff you write to my
e-mail I could edit it for you. Just to make it easier to read.
Great Story
I like it.
I rlly like it!!! :D keep writing! i would love to read more :)
1) YES!
2)YUP
3) How about when micheals ex starts to get jealous towards Fenoex b/c she hangsout with him
1) yes
2) yes
3) no keep doing what your doing. :)