Hogwarts --> LIFE IN HOGWARTS
Comment for me to include you in the next parts of the story. Include basic information and interests and I'll let you know if you make it into my story (you can make someone interesting up if u wanna)
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P-S: SORRY, IF I DON'T INCLUDE UR CHARACTER STRAIGHT AWAY- I WILL DO AS QUICK AS I CAN!
plz tell me about ur character now!! ^_^
Chapter 1
Entering Hogwarts
I peer out of the train window into the distance towards Hogwarts. Luckily, I have grabbed a train compartment to myself and no one has disturbed me yet. The site of Hogwarts is utterly stunning. The many turrets and towers shadow the surrounding grounds of the castle and the sun beats down on the many windows, making them shine out like stars in the night sky.
It had been amazing when the Hogwarts letter had arrived at my tiny cottage in the welsh countryside. My mum had been so proud, tears leaking from her electric blue eyes, saying how proud she was that I'd taken after my dad. Mum is a non-magic person- I never call her a muggle- I feel that I would be insulting her to name her like that. But mum really is the most inspiring and determined person you can find anywhere. Dad, however was a wizard but unfortunately, as I have heared from my mum so many times, he died as a hero, fighting for what he believed in.
I don't like to think about it, so I distract myself with dragging my spotted suitacse down from the worn luggage rack, as the train slows and then screeches to a halt.
I climb off the train, standing in a pool of cloaked children starting their school year, and begin I make my way towards a large figure calling for first-years, like myself.
I travel in boats accross a large, dark lake with the other people in my year and gaze in awe at the Hogwarts Castle coming nearer by the minute.
By the time the boats reach shore, I find myself wishing the uniform was slightly warmer and I notice I'm not the only one begining to shiver. The large, hairy man calls to us to follow him to the Castle Entrance and everyone follows him silently like sheeps following a shepherd.
At last, we reach the large bronze door to the castle. The large man knocks and the door creaks slowly open.
I really can't wait for the year to begin...
It had been amazing when the Hogwarts letter had arrived at my tiny cottage in the welsh countryside. My mum had been so proud, tears leaking from her electric blue eyes, saying how proud she was that I'd taken after my dad. Mum is a non-magic person- I never call her a muggle- I feel that I would be insulting her to name her like that. But mum really is the most inspiring and determined person you can find anywhere. Dad, however was a wizard but unfortunately, as I have heared from my mum so many times, he died as a hero, fighting for what he believed in.
I don't like to think about it, so I distract myself with dragging my spotted suitacse down from the worn luggage rack, as the train slows and then screeches to a halt.
I climb off the train, standing in a pool of cloaked children starting their school year, and begin I make my way towards a large figure calling for first-years, like myself.
I travel in boats accross a large, dark lake with the other people in my year and gaze in awe at the Hogwarts Castle coming nearer by the minute.
By the time the boats reach shore, I find myself wishing the uniform was slightly warmer and I notice I'm not the only one begining to shiver. The large, hairy man calls to us to follow him to the Castle Entrance and everyone follows him silently like sheeps following a shepherd.
At last, we reach the large bronze door to the castle. The large man knocks and the door creaks slowly open.
I really can't wait for the year to begin...



141 Comments
can I pleassse be in it?
name-samantha
hair colour-brown
eye colour-brown
blood- pureblood but doesnt care about plood status
house- slytherin or ravenclaw
boyfriend (at some point)- draco
p.s. it sounds like a good story so far! keep writing (:
i will includee you :) thankss
i likee ur character :D
thanks :D
name-samantha
hair colour-black
eye colour- change colour depending on mood
blood- pureblood but doesnt care about blood status
house- gryffindor
boyfriend (at some point)- fred weasly
call me sam!!!!!!
Heyy :) i'll includee ya
greaat idea about the changing eye colour ;D
Cool ! In real life, my eyes do that too ! Ya kno..change colors..
Anyways, I'd love to be in the story !!!! ^_^
My name is- Kaylee Alyssa
Hair Color- Brunette
Eye Color-Changes Color Depending On Mood, But Hazel most of the time
Skin Color-Pale
House-Slytherin
**HOPEFULLY** Boyfriend-Draco Malfoy
OH ! Extra info- Guys call me Kales and KK if ya wanna include that ! Lolz
name-abigail
hair colour-blonde
eye colour- black
blood- pureblood
house- slythrein
boyfriend (at some point)- Harry
Okayy :)
youu can be in the next part :D
i will try and make u and harry involved ;) Xx
Hey Icecream-Sprinkle!!!!! Thanks again, and can i be in it?
I Will be:
Skye Sparks: Auburn Hair, blue eyes, fair skin, very pretty, and her house is Slytherin, but friends with alot of people, popular, and her boyfriend will be Draco Malfoy
Hi thankss for so manyy comments :D
cuzz 3 of ya wanna go out with dracoo ;) i will like, get a little battle goin between u in the story, so yall are fightin over draco :))) is that okayy guyss??
oooh that will be funny... (:
hey i love the story can i be in it
Name: Katie Devlin
Hair;brown
Eyes:blue
Blood: half bood but doesnt care
House:gryffindor
Boyfriend: the 1 the only seamus finnigan plz
what im like: i like to prank people, i dont pay attention in class but get good grades, im irish and i play chasher in quidditch
ooooh next please! :)
i luv this and i really wanna be in it!!!
name: Elena Black
Hair: Golden brown with some black and blonde streaks in it also has a redish tint
Eyes: Change color but mostly are grayish green or greenish black
Blodd status: pureblood but doesnt care what so ever
house: Gryffindor
Boyfriend; I'll take Fred Weasley (I begg u for him!) George Weasley or Oliver Wood :p
Personality: a year older than the golden trio! prankster. happy. alway always hyper! loud! friendly! has a short temper.
okayy :) is george weasley okay? fred's already taken soz
yah thats ok! hes the 2nd best nxt to fred! oh and im alsao sirius blacks daughter and remus lupins my godfather! :p
Soo good but don't forget to place me in a hous!!!
i won't!! i havent got to S yet!!