Black Clouds
Hey guys!! I had to write this for school and I wanted to know what y'all think about. I'm gonna try really hard to continue my other stories. If you want to help me with the other stories, message me and we can work together on it!
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Chapter 1
A Frightful Evening
Crisp Fall air wrapped around my torso. Wind blew my long light brown hair. A light breeze whispered in my ears. Red, orange, and brown leaves covered the grass like a blanket. Against the sun, tall trees were silhouetted. The scenery was a perfect painting. My hands gripped the railing on the balcony. The balcony was outside of my bedroom. It is located on the back of my tan house. I always sat in my balcony when ever I need to think things through or when I'm bored. Smoke rose from the ground. I glanced down. "Hi Mom!" I yelled down to my mother. She jerked her head in my direction. "Annelise, the steak is ready! Come on down to the kitchen," Mom informed me. I gave her a thumbs up and darted into my bedroom. I galloped down the stairs. I found my way to the kitchen. "Annie! Annie!" an unfamiliar vioce called. I gazed around the room. My grandparents call me Annie. Sometimes my brother Denny will call me Annie. My gut reaction was Denny trying to scare me. "Cut it out Denny!" I yelled. "Annie! Annie!" the voice continued. The voice was deep and creepy. Denny's voice is in the middle. I felt hands hold my hips. I twisted my body around and saw nothing. Denny rushed down the stairs and made and entrence. "I'm here!!!" he commented. I let out a huge sigh. "Denny, were you trying to scare me earlier?" I demanded. He shoke his head no. I tensed up. "You weren't calling my name?" I asked worriedly. "No, Annelise!" Denny said annoyed. I stared into his sea foam green eyes. "Denny!" Denny!" a female voice said. "Is your girlfriend over again?" "Nooooo. Why?" "I'm hearing a girl calling your name," He became as white as a sheet. Denny looked like he just saw a ghost....which he did.



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