When Hell Breaks Loose
Chapter 1
This Is How It Starts
"Maybe it's just stress Selena," Doc suggested.
"No Doc, it's more than that. I swear it wasn't normal! I woke up screaming and crying," I explained. He didn't believe me! Something was going to happen. Something bad. My therapist was always so understanding but this was just too cooky for him. I had this dream the night before that something horrible was going to happen. Like Hell will soon walk the Earth. My dad always told me that Hell will run out of room, and the dead will walk the Earth. It seems to me like it's going to happen soon. The dream was all too real. The apocalyptic world was disgusting. There weren't zombies like cheesey horror movies. There were demons raping and murdering people out in the open. Those bad people didn't even look real. They were dead and had horns above their hairline, and had voices that let you know they're from Hell. All raspy, deep, crackly and just plain freaking scary! People cowered because you can't really help but be scared by that; I was and I was sleeping. This was all viewed in third-person. So I don't think they could see me. I'd explained this to Dr. Brown already but he didn't believe me. I'm so not going crazy!
"Well Miss Montegomery, your session is up," he interrupted my thoughts.
"Thanks Doc!" I called rushing out the door to meet my friend Marcie.
"Are you okay Sel? You look a little bit jumpy," She asked, concerned.
"Marc i gotta tell you something. But you gotta promise you won't judge me," I said.
"Promise," she replied holding out her pinky. I laughed and explained it to her while sitting at a coffee shop outside. Suddenly, something changed in her face; she got pitch black eyes with absolutely no white in them, small, black horns about two inches above her eyebrows, and she looked totally evil.
"Selena Montegomery, Hell will walk the Earth. And you will soon be dead, walking along side us demons. You are developing psychic abilities. They are my father, Satan's, gift to you. So join us, join us in ruling the Earth by unleashing the Underworld," The horrid demon said in a terrible voice that made me cry.
"Never," i replied sobbing.
"Then burn in Hell. Literally It will all come true soon enough," he vanished and Marcie was back. She had fainted and my legs gave in. I fell to the floor and felt a warm pain on my head. I was soon unconscious.
"No Doc, it's more than that. I swear it wasn't normal! I woke up screaming and crying," I explained. He didn't believe me! Something was going to happen. Something bad. My therapist was always so understanding but this was just too cooky for him. I had this dream the night before that something horrible was going to happen. Like Hell will soon walk the Earth. My dad always told me that Hell will run out of room, and the dead will walk the Earth. It seems to me like it's going to happen soon. The dream was all too real. The apocalyptic world was disgusting. There weren't zombies like cheesey horror movies. There were demons raping and murdering people out in the open. Those bad people didn't even look real. They were dead and had horns above their hairline, and had voices that let you know they're from Hell. All raspy, deep, crackly and just plain freaking scary! People cowered because you can't really help but be scared by that; I was and I was sleeping. This was all viewed in third-person. So I don't think they could see me. I'd explained this to Dr. Brown already but he didn't believe me. I'm so not going crazy!
"Well Miss Montegomery, your session is up," he interrupted my thoughts.
"Thanks Doc!" I called rushing out the door to meet my friend Marcie.
"Are you okay Sel? You look a little bit jumpy," She asked, concerned.
"Marc i gotta tell you something. But you gotta promise you won't judge me," I said.
"Promise," she replied holding out her pinky. I laughed and explained it to her while sitting at a coffee shop outside. Suddenly, something changed in her face; she got pitch black eyes with absolutely no white in them, small, black horns about two inches above her eyebrows, and she looked totally evil.
"Selena Montegomery, Hell will walk the Earth. And you will soon be dead, walking along side us demons. You are developing psychic abilities. They are my father, Satan's, gift to you. So join us, join us in ruling the Earth by unleashing the Underworld," The horrid demon said in a terrible voice that made me cry.
"Never," i replied sobbing.
"Then burn in Hell. Literally It will all come true soon enough," he vanished and Marcie was back. She had fainted and my legs gave in. I fell to the floor and felt a warm pain on my head. I was soon unconscious.



17 Comments
Awesome! Great idea, it's so transfixing and I don't want to stop reading! :D
very good.keep going
Keep going!!!! I seriously love this story already!!! =]
cool beans!!!
AWESOME!!!!
i cant wait to read more >.
Wow that was cool, tell me when you write more. K
sure thing:)
You always manage to make a very exciting and amazing piece of writing! Please write more soon! :O
I agree! More plzzz :D
Write more. PLZ. It scares me but it's so awesome at the same time!!
It's still amazing! Please write the next chapter soon! :D