This is the first part of a book im writting i would like your input. PLEASE READ, I NEED INPUT!!
I do not have a title yet so anyone who thinks they would know a good title please send it to me, im also wandering if you think it is good enough to publish.
My name is Drey, this is my story I woke up on the beach staring at the stars, not knowing wear I am or who I am. All I remember is a dog a very big dog that has chased me through my dreams for years even to this day. I remember trying to get up but feeling every part of my body hurting and soar, then I heard some sirens but blacked out before I knew who the sirens were after or if they were close to me. The next thing I knew I was in a hospital, the first thing I remember hearing was the faint beep of the heart monitor beside my bed. When I finale opened my eyes I was in a hospital room that had a great view over looking the ocean. the nurse beside my bed said that I had a close call, I tried to respond but soon found that I had hoses running down my throat. She said that they had found me on the beach and I had been in comma for almost two months. She also mentioned that nobody knew my name or how I ended up half dead on the beach. That's when I realized I had no clue who I was or where I was supposed to be. . .
I was jumping off of a 30 story Building somewhere New York. All I can think I'm going to die, I'm going to end up just being another grease puddle on the busy concrete street below. While I was praying that I wouldn't die, I noticed a kids birthday bouncy house sitting just right of heart I was going to land, I waved my arms up and down and kicked my feet trying to somehow get over that two or three feet I needed to live. Oh no I missed, I'm dead! I'm dead! is what I screamed as the people below me just realized what was happening. Right before I hit the ground I was hit by the up draft, as I was just starting to wake up in the space-like tube, I remembered that it had all been nothing more than anther test done by one of those freak show scientists'. That's when then tight little tube was opened and I was pulled out, I still couldn't believe I had actually been stupid enough to accept them to "test" my abilities of fast thinking and problem solving in there special ways of seeing if I had what it takes to be able to live in the most horrible situations of life. I had actually accepted to let them almost kill me off in another one of there simulated scenario's, Just like the one from yesterday where I was shot 15 times. I was then taken to the exam room where I have to write reports on what happened to me and whether or not I would have lived if I was in one of these actual scenario's. Believe it or not but this is there way of seeing if I could survive being in the real world, they want to make sure I'll survive for the few months ahead in the real world so they are making me learn how to survive by killing me and then teaching me how I could have survived that scenario. . . see after I woke up on the beach two years ago I could do things not very many others could do, I could react up to 300% faster than a normal human can, The doctor said he thinks its because the loss of oxygen when I almost drowned in the ocean when I did get oxygen back to my brain it had done cause a reaction, but I believe there was something radioactive in the water, and that's the reason I can not remember why I was on the ocean, but at least I remember everything else before that week. They want me to survive the next few months because they want to see if the can create more people like me, more people that can react the same way as I do.
My name is Dray, this is my story I woke up on the beach staring at the stars, not knowing wear I am or who I am. All I remember is a dog a very big dog that has chased me through my dreams for years even to this day. I remember trying to get up but feeling every part of my body hurting and soar, then I heard some sirens but blacked out before I knew who the sirens were after or if they were close to me. The next thing I knew I was in a hospital, the first thing I remember hearing was the faint beep of the heart monitor beside my bed. When I finale opened my eyes I was in a hospital room that had a great view over looking the ocean. the nurse beside my bed said that I had a close call, I tried to respond but soon found that I had hoses running down my throat. She said that they had found me on the beach and I had been in comma for almost two months. She also mentioned that nobody knew my name or how I ended up half dead on the beach. That's when I realized I had no clue who I was or wear I was supposed to be. . .
I was jumping off of a 30 story Building somewhere New York. All I can think I'm going to die, I'm going to end up just being another grease puddle on the busy concrete street below. While I was praying that I wouldn't die, I noticed a kids birthday bouncy house sitting just right of wear I was going to land, I waved my arms up and down and kicked my feet trying to somehow get over that two or three feet I needed to live. Oh no I missed, I'm dead! I'm dead! is what I screamed as the people below me just realized what was happening. Right before I hit the ground I was hit by the up draft, as I was just starting to wake up in the space-like tube, I rememberd that it had all been nothing more than anther test done by one of those freak show scientists'. That's when then tight little tube was opened and I was pulled out, I still couldn't believe I had actually been stupid enough to accept them to "test" my abilities of fast thinking and problem solving in there special ways of seeing if I had what it takes to be able to live in the most horrible situations of life. I had actually accepted to let them almost kill me off in another one of there simulated scenario's, Just like the one from yesterday where I was shot 15 times. I was then taken to the exam room where I have to write reports on what happened to me and whether or not I would have lived if I was in one of these actual scenario's. Believe it or not but this is there way of seeing if I could survive being in the real world, they want to make sure I'll survive for the few months ahead in the real world so they are making me learn how to survive by killing me and then teaching me how I could have survived that scenario. . . see after I woke up on the beach two years ago I could do things not very many others could do, I could react up to 300% faster than a normal human can, The doctor said he thinks its because the loss of oxygen when I almost drowned in the ocean when I did get oxygen back to my brain it had done cause a reaction, but I believe there was something radioactive in the water, and that's the reason I can not remember why I was on the ocean, but at least I remember everything else before that week. They want me to survive the next few months because they want to see if the can create more people like me, more people that can react the same way as I do.
I was jumping off of a 30 story Building somewhere New York. All I can think I'm going to die, I'm going to end up just being another grease puddle on the busy concrete street below. While I was praying that I wouldn't die, I noticed a kids birthday bouncy house sitting just right of heart I was going to land, I waved my arms up and down and kicked my feet trying to somehow get over that two or three feet I needed to live. Oh no I missed, I'm dead! I'm dead! is what I screamed as the people below me just realized what was happening. Right before I hit the ground I was hit by the up draft, as I was just starting to wake up in the space-like tube, I remembered that it had all been nothing more than anther test done by one of those freak show scientists'. That's when then tight little tube was opened and I was pulled out, I still couldn't believe I had actually been stupid enough to accept them to "test" my abilities of fast thinking and problem solving in there special ways of seeing if I had what it takes to be able to live in the most horrible situations of life. I had actually accepted to let them almost kill me off in another one of there simulated scenario's, Just like the one from yesterday where I was shot 15 times. I was then taken to the exam room where I have to write reports on what happened to me and whether or not I would have lived if I was in one of these actual scenario's. Believe it or not but this is there way of seeing if I could survive being in the real world, they want to make sure I'll survive for the few months ahead in the real world so they are making me learn how to survive by killing me and then teaching me how I could have survived that scenario. . . see after I woke up on the beach two years ago I could do things not very many others could do, I could react up to 300% faster than a normal human can, The doctor said he thinks its because the loss of oxygen when I almost drowned in the ocean when I did get oxygen back to my brain it had done cause a reaction, but I believe there was something radioactive in the water, and that's the reason I can not remember why I was on the ocean, but at least I remember everything else before that week. They want me to survive the next few months because they want to see if the can create more people like me, more people that can react the same way as I do.
My name is Dray, this is my story I woke up on the beach staring at the stars, not knowing wear I am or who I am. All I remember is a dog a very big dog that has chased me through my dreams for years even to this day. I remember trying to get up but feeling every part of my body hurting and soar, then I heard some sirens but blacked out before I knew who the sirens were after or if they were close to me. The next thing I knew I was in a hospital, the first thing I remember hearing was the faint beep of the heart monitor beside my bed. When I finale opened my eyes I was in a hospital room that had a great view over looking the ocean. the nurse beside my bed said that I had a close call, I tried to respond but soon found that I had hoses running down my throat. She said that they had found me on the beach and I had been in comma for almost two months. She also mentioned that nobody knew my name or how I ended up half dead on the beach. That's when I realized I had no clue who I was or wear I was supposed to be. . .
I was jumping off of a 30 story Building somewhere New York. All I can think I'm going to die, I'm going to end up just being another grease puddle on the busy concrete street below. While I was praying that I wouldn't die, I noticed a kids birthday bouncy house sitting just right of wear I was going to land, I waved my arms up and down and kicked my feet trying to somehow get over that two or three feet I needed to live. Oh no I missed, I'm dead! I'm dead! is what I screamed as the people below me just realized what was happening. Right before I hit the ground I was hit by the up draft, as I was just starting to wake up in the space-like tube, I rememberd that it had all been nothing more than anther test done by one of those freak show scientists'. That's when then tight little tube was opened and I was pulled out, I still couldn't believe I had actually been stupid enough to accept them to "test" my abilities of fast thinking and problem solving in there special ways of seeing if I had what it takes to be able to live in the most horrible situations of life. I had actually accepted to let them almost kill me off in another one of there simulated scenario's, Just like the one from yesterday where I was shot 15 times. I was then taken to the exam room where I have to write reports on what happened to me and whether or not I would have lived if I was in one of these actual scenario's. Believe it or not but this is there way of seeing if I could survive being in the real world, they want to make sure I'll survive for the few months ahead in the real world so they are making me learn how to survive by killing me and then teaching me how I could have survived that scenario. . . see after I woke up on the beach two years ago I could do things not very many others could do, I could react up to 300% faster than a normal human can, The doctor said he thinks its because the loss of oxygen when I almost drowned in the ocean when I did get oxygen back to my brain it had done cause a reaction, but I believe there was something radioactive in the water, and that's the reason I can not remember why I was on the ocean, but at least I remember everything else before that week. They want me to survive the next few months because they want to see if the can create more people like me, more people that can react the same way as I do.
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