I Love you Because You Hate Me (Neville Longbottom)
Ok so this is my first Neville Longbottom Story (or any story) i put on here, i promise i have another one and i MIGHT put it on here, i also have a Fred Weasley love story idea but let's talk about that later cuz i'm getting off topic. Ok so yea, rate comment, suscribe (haha jk) and yea watcha still reading this for? Reeeaaadd!!!! (pleeze!)
Chapter 1
Chapter one since i suck at coming up with titles
"Hey Danielle," my extremely hot boyfriend Draco Malfoy called from across the Slytherin common room. "Dont call me that," i hissed as he tried to put his arm around my shoulder. "Aw why not, i like it way more than 'Danny'." he said as we stepped out of the common room to breakfast.
"I hate Danielle it's way too girly... I hate it," "But it's so pretty, just like you,"
I laughed, he was so cheesy when it comes to stuff like this. "I think you need to work on your pick up lines," "But i dont need them, I've already got you," "That's better,"
We walked into the Great Hall where i saw those distugusting Gryffindors Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws.I didnt like Gryffindors, because obviously because they were Gryffindors, i don't like Hufflepuffs because they are way too nice and weak, and i don't like Ravenclaws because they are a bunch of stuckups.
I sat down next to Draco and helped myself to some toast, just toast I'm on a diet.
When breakfast was over we walked over to Potions, pushing stupid helpless first years out of the way.
The Potions classroom was dark and almost scary as usual, as was the Potions master Severus Snape who was grading papers. I admired him deeply.
"Yo, Snape, waz crackin'?" I greeted him. "Hello Miss Lush." he said dully not looking up at me. Draco and i took our usual seats in the second row, I pushed Neville Longbottom out of my seat, he knows I always sits there, that dumb@$$ probably forgot. He looked at me from the floor he was sprawled on. I just laughed, he looked like such an idiot. He scrambled up quickly and looked at me over his shoulder before departing from the dirty floor to a seat next to that Mudblood Granger who had just entered the room. Longbottom whispered something in her ear then she glared at me got up and stormed over to us.
"Oh.My.God. Can't you just lay off Neville for five seconds?! I swear you two are so annoying! You don't even know how he felt when he first met you. I cannot explain how much i hate you right now -" "Then dont waist your breath, I know you hate me and i hate you too, forever and always. Now get out of here Granger before I get infected by you," i spat. She glared at me once more and stomped away as soon as the bell rang.
"Take out your books and turn to page 109...." was all i heard Snape say because i started to daydream. I was a Slytherin, I'll get an 'O' in Potions no matter what.
The rest of the day was way too boring, as usual. Me and Draco were in the common room again staring at the fire, my head on his lap and he was stroking my short amber hair. "I'm bored," I complained. "Then do something," he suggested. "Like what? There's nothing to do; hence why I'm bored. Duh," "Like," he lifted me up and put me on his lap. "this." He was kissing me. Hard. It was wierd at first because he never snogged me like that before. But i went along with it evenutally. I wasn't sure how long we were making out but I'm pretty sure it was really long, because i just know these things. And Pansy interupted us, her arms crossed and foot tapping disapprovingly. Just like my mother. Wierd.
"Danny I'm going to bed are you coming?"she said. She was my best friend but could be a real pain in the @zz sometimes. I really need to get new friends. My current ones are pathetic.
"Yea i'll be there. You don't have to wait for me, i'm a big girl i can walk up the stairs alone." I said a little annoyed. I knew she had a crush on Draco. That's what made it even better going out with him.
Pansy turned on her heel and strode up the stairs a little more dramaticly than any other normal person would of.
"Nice," Draco said smirking as he watched her go up the staircase. "Thanks, well i have to go before Pansy's head explodes." "That would be awesome!" "Haha very funny. Well goodnight." i kissed his cheek and went up to my dorm, pulled on my pajamas, layed down in my bed and drifted off to sleep expecting my bothersome friend to be shaking me awake in the morning yelling in my ear, "Danny, Danny wake up!!" even if it's on the weekend I know to always expect the same thing....
I really need a new roomamate.
*So that was the first chapter (obviously) tell me what ya think and pleeze comment tell me if i need improvement, constructive critisum (sp?) message me if you have any ideas and i could try and use them. :)sorry if it was short &thanks for reading :) addie*
"I hate Danielle it's way too girly... I hate it," "But it's so pretty, just like you,"
I laughed, he was so cheesy when it comes to stuff like this. "I think you need to work on your pick up lines," "But i dont need them, I've already got you," "That's better,"
We walked into the Great Hall where i saw those distugusting Gryffindors Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws.I didnt like Gryffindors, because obviously because they were Gryffindors, i don't like Hufflepuffs because they are way too nice and weak, and i don't like Ravenclaws because they are a bunch of stuckups.
I sat down next to Draco and helped myself to some toast, just toast I'm on a diet.
When breakfast was over we walked over to Potions, pushing stupid helpless first years out of the way.
The Potions classroom was dark and almost scary as usual, as was the Potions master Severus Snape who was grading papers. I admired him deeply.
"Yo, Snape, waz crackin'?" I greeted him. "Hello Miss Lush." he said dully not looking up at me. Draco and i took our usual seats in the second row, I pushed Neville Longbottom out of my seat, he knows I always sits there, that dumb@$$ probably forgot. He looked at me from the floor he was sprawled on. I just laughed, he looked like such an idiot. He scrambled up quickly and looked at me over his shoulder before departing from the dirty floor to a seat next to that Mudblood Granger who had just entered the room. Longbottom whispered something in her ear then she glared at me got up and stormed over to us.
"Oh.My.God. Can't you just lay off Neville for five seconds?! I swear you two are so annoying! You don't even know how he felt when he first met you. I cannot explain how much i hate you right now -" "Then dont waist your breath, I know you hate me and i hate you too, forever and always. Now get out of here Granger before I get infected by you," i spat. She glared at me once more and stomped away as soon as the bell rang.
"Take out your books and turn to page 109...." was all i heard Snape say because i started to daydream. I was a Slytherin, I'll get an 'O' in Potions no matter what.
The rest of the day was way too boring, as usual. Me and Draco were in the common room again staring at the fire, my head on his lap and he was stroking my short amber hair. "I'm bored," I complained. "Then do something," he suggested. "Like what? There's nothing to do; hence why I'm bored. Duh," "Like," he lifted me up and put me on his lap. "this." He was kissing me. Hard. It was wierd at first because he never snogged me like that before. But i went along with it evenutally. I wasn't sure how long we were making out but I'm pretty sure it was really long, because i just know these things. And Pansy interupted us, her arms crossed and foot tapping disapprovingly. Just like my mother. Wierd.
"Danny I'm going to bed are you coming?"she said. She was my best friend but could be a real pain in the @zz sometimes. I really need to get new friends. My current ones are pathetic.
"Yea i'll be there. You don't have to wait for me, i'm a big girl i can walk up the stairs alone." I said a little annoyed. I knew she had a crush on Draco. That's what made it even better going out with him.
Pansy turned on her heel and strode up the stairs a little more dramaticly than any other normal person would of.
"Nice," Draco said smirking as he watched her go up the staircase. "Thanks, well i have to go before Pansy's head explodes." "That would be awesome!" "Haha very funny. Well goodnight." i kissed his cheek and went up to my dorm, pulled on my pajamas, layed down in my bed and drifted off to sleep expecting my bothersome friend to be shaking me awake in the morning yelling in my ear, "Danny, Danny wake up!!" even if it's on the weekend I know to always expect the same thing....
I really need a new roomamate.
*So that was the first chapter (obviously) tell me what ya think and pleeze comment tell me if i need improvement, constructive critisum (sp?) message me if you have any ideas and i could try and use them. :)sorry if it was short &thanks for reading :) addie*



93 Comments
Next!! Good background story
I really want to know what happenes next!!!
Poor Neville ;(
hugs Neville
Haha ikr and thanks :)
Thank you! My wife might get jealous, though! LOL!
Why do muggles type "LOL"?
Sorry, but she must have to face the fact that you're just downright awesome XD
NEXT!!! :D
Really good! :)
Really? Wow thanks :) i'm working on the second chapter right now, its almost done ;)
Really good. Like i said, u got talent, girl, you got talent.
Awe Neville is such a sweetheart :D
I WANNA DATE HIM!!
great story, I can wait to see what happens next :)
Next!!! Please
Neville is so cute!!!!
hugs
yer Im a hugger!!
Next next next next !!!
Next!!!
Oh that puzzling dumbeldor
hugs Neville
had to do that ;)
KEEP GOIN!!! DON"T STOP!!!!
Oh cute
Untill the kidnapping of course
Poor Neville :(
Just when a girl likes him she's taken away
hugs ;)
this is so cool!!! more!! :D
how could Draco do that???? I thought he was loving to girls. WHY DRACO??? WHY????