A poem i just found...once again
Chapter 1
Drowning
I couldn't see...
water was lapping my stomach...
pulling me deeper...
I felt a hand go to my thigh...
then another on my heel...
pulling me down...
horrible crashing sounds were erupting in my ears...
and blindness took over...
salt...burning my eyes...
as my arms flailed uncontrollably...
deeper...darker...
gasps for escaped my mouth...
and more hands grabbed on...
my legs...my shoulders...
I was too far out...
no one could hear me...
bubbles foaming atop the waves...
crashing into my face...
water in my nose...
can't breathe...can't breathe...
I open my mouth to inhale...
but water pours in...
I can't get it out...
filling my lungs and head...
my skin was frozen...
my heart thumping wildly...
a hand snaked around my waist...
it was dripping and slimy...
nail dug into my sides like an anchor...
and one last tug drew me under...
silently gasping...
water gushed through my body...
my eyes shot open...
and I could see the surface from beneath...
the sun was morphed by the ripples...
muffled laughter...red eyes...
grinning teeth...
and shadows...
nails dug harder into me...
blood escaped and colored the water...
pain...salt got into my wounds and stung...
tears undistinguishable in the wetness...
and then blackness....
water was lapping my stomach...
pulling me deeper...
I felt a hand go to my thigh...
then another on my heel...
pulling me down...
horrible crashing sounds were erupting in my ears...
and blindness took over...
salt...burning my eyes...
as my arms flailed uncontrollably...
deeper...darker...
gasps for escaped my mouth...
and more hands grabbed on...
my legs...my shoulders...
I was too far out...
no one could hear me...
bubbles foaming atop the waves...
crashing into my face...
water in my nose...
can't breathe...can't breathe...
I open my mouth to inhale...
but water pours in...
I can't get it out...
filling my lungs and head...
my skin was frozen...
my heart thumping wildly...
a hand snaked around my waist...
it was dripping and slimy...
nail dug into my sides like an anchor...
and one last tug drew me under...
silently gasping...
water gushed through my body...
my eyes shot open...
and I could see the surface from beneath...
the sun was morphed by the ripples...
muffled laughter...red eyes...
grinning teeth...
and shadows...
nails dug harder into me...
blood escaped and colored the water...
pain...salt got into my wounds and stung...
tears undistinguishable in the wetness...
and then blackness....



6 Comments
Very well written. I love the scene and the details you described. Simply a beautiful piece of art.
I agree with KarmaXBitesXClaws!! It was great :D
at first it sounded like being drug into hell, then the creature from the black lagoon, very nice. I like it.
sounds really dark...and morbid..
O_O wow... very dark and amazing...
Wow. That was amazing. Great details.