knife strife.
The story of a deranged murderer who seeks revenge on his family who attempted to send him to prison...
Chapter 1
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Dan was 17 he lived on his own in a small house, he wasn't rich or poor he dropped out of school and he was a thief, its all he could do as he had no other means of earing money and he could not live with his family as he hated them all. Dan hid in his basement he was watching a movie, a horror movie; return of the dead. He didn't particularily like horror movies but he couldn't stop watching it, the blood. The gore. The death. He was fascinated by it all and he wondered what it was like to kill someone.
The next day, Dan was on his weekly burglary in the house of his neighbour kenny, he was staying on high alert as he knew kenny would not be long to arrive home from work. Dan was in the living room when he heard a voice, this voice was not a normal human voice but a sinister dark voice which spoke quietly but powerfully. " you are not alone," the voice whispered. "You are not alone," he repeated. "HIDE!" Shouted the voice again. So, he hid, Dan hid inside a wardrobe, and he waited, and waited, and waited, he felt he should leave but this voice kept telling him to hide. A lock turned. A door creaked open and footseps rolled into the house followed by the sound of a man humming. Dan peeked through a gap in the wardobe doors and saw Kenny sitting on a sofa with his back to the wardrobe reading a magazine. "You have one chance now, take his life or you are to be caught. Dan didn't know what to do but he just had to do anything to stay out of prison. Dan opened the wardrobe doors very gingerly and crept out of the wardrobe, he saw a knife laying temptingly on a table. " Do it now. DO IT!" screamed the voice. Dan sweeped up the knife and slit it across the unsuspecting Kenny whom attempted to scream but had had his mouth covered by Dan's sweaty hands. Blood was spewing out of Kenny's neck and his clothes were stained red, it was a horrible sight for Dan, but, he enjoyed every second of it. His adrenaline was pumping at extreme rates and he couldn't stop himself from laugh. Dan's "fun" was shortly ended when the voice screamed "RUN, RUN, RUN,"
Dan's then escaped out of a window and left the dying Kenny to endure his last moments of life.
The next day, Dan was on his weekly burglary in the house of his neighbour kenny, he was staying on high alert as he knew kenny would not be long to arrive home from work. Dan was in the living room when he heard a voice, this voice was not a normal human voice but a sinister dark voice which spoke quietly but powerfully. " you are not alone," the voice whispered. "You are not alone," he repeated. "HIDE!" Shouted the voice again. So, he hid, Dan hid inside a wardrobe, and he waited, and waited, and waited, he felt he should leave but this voice kept telling him to hide. A lock turned. A door creaked open and footseps rolled into the house followed by the sound of a man humming. Dan peeked through a gap in the wardobe doors and saw Kenny sitting on a sofa with his back to the wardrobe reading a magazine. "You have one chance now, take his life or you are to be caught. Dan didn't know what to do but he just had to do anything to stay out of prison. Dan opened the wardrobe doors very gingerly and crept out of the wardrobe, he saw a knife laying temptingly on a table. " Do it now. DO IT!" screamed the voice. Dan sweeped up the knife and slit it across the unsuspecting Kenny whom attempted to scream but had had his mouth covered by Dan's sweaty hands. Blood was spewing out of Kenny's neck and his clothes were stained red, it was a horrible sight for Dan, but, he enjoyed every second of it. His adrenaline was pumping at extreme rates and he couldn't stop himself from laugh. Dan's "fun" was shortly ended when the voice screamed "RUN, RUN, RUN,"
Dan's then escaped out of a window and left the dying Kenny to endure his last moments of life.



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