Lost Juliet
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XD Idk hope you enjoy the poem though :P
Chapter 1
Lost Juliet
A Shakespearean play....
Twisted,
With a different plot, and a different ending.
Was this positivially accurate to have done so?
Changing the romance into a one sided love?
Where poor Juliet dreadfully consults her forever may crush Romeo,
For him to then shun her,
Then secretly love this fair maiden like that of the Bees to their nectar.
With heavenly kisses,
And forever vows to betrothal,
Where instead..
Thus shuns, and breaks the mere heart of this delicate flower.
Where she falls deep,
Like that of Ophelia,
And her Suicide.
So down,
So deep, and cold.
For she couldn't have her dear Hamlet.
Yet poor Juliet did presure to think to commit such ill consequence,
And cause others pain that did not to her.
So intensively.....
The tragic ending of the duet suicide......
With a dagger,
And poison to stop the very heart,
Effortlessly,
And clean....
This fair maiden....
I dare not write the ending,
For that would be a role I could not foresee in such play.
Yet it has been written in many versions,
Some never reach the light of appreciation,
Some are smothered with that with hatred....
So I leave this to you
To give this Lost Juliet
Her own tragic ending,
Than the one that was written by the Bard himself.
Never the less....
It takes two to make one,
But can one subside to create a duet one more effective then that when in a partnership?
Or,
Would it take one, to destroy the patterns of two, to create the unknown that is unknown, or is merely just fiction, within fiction?
Twisted,
With a different plot, and a different ending.
Was this positivially accurate to have done so?
Changing the romance into a one sided love?
Where poor Juliet dreadfully consults her forever may crush Romeo,
For him to then shun her,
Then secretly love this fair maiden like that of the Bees to their nectar.
With heavenly kisses,
And forever vows to betrothal,
Where instead..
Thus shuns, and breaks the mere heart of this delicate flower.
Where she falls deep,
Like that of Ophelia,
And her Suicide.
So down,
So deep, and cold.
For she couldn't have her dear Hamlet.
Yet poor Juliet did presure to think to commit such ill consequence,
And cause others pain that did not to her.
So intensively.....
The tragic ending of the duet suicide......
With a dagger,
And poison to stop the very heart,
Effortlessly,
And clean....
This fair maiden....
I dare not write the ending,
For that would be a role I could not foresee in such play.
Yet it has been written in many versions,
Some never reach the light of appreciation,
Some are smothered with that with hatred....
So I leave this to you
To give this Lost Juliet
Her own tragic ending,
Than the one that was written by the Bard himself.
Never the less....
It takes two to make one,
But can one subside to create a duet one more effective then that when in a partnership?
Or,
Would it take one, to destroy the patterns of two, to create the unknown that is unknown, or is merely just fiction, within fiction?



4 Comments
Wow breathe taking!!!! I love it! =]
I gotta give it 4 stars. +5 for a good poem but -1 for it being Shakespeare related
(i don't like his plays)
sonds like shakespear
You are good! and I blame you for all shakespear related thoughts today