Evil Nature: Chapter 4
Chapter 4 sorry it took me so long to get it up,I'll try to get my stories up quicker.
"No,what if the ghost comes back?",I asked terrified. "Sybil,theres no such things as ghosts,get that through your head",Crow said getting annoyed now
"But.....But",I started. "SYBIL",my brother growled flashing me the death glare
unable to speak,I just quieted right down. And with that my brother walked out the door,closing it behind him. As soon as the door clicked shut,my room began to shake wildly. What the hell,I thought to myself,and suddenly she was back.... Muther Natcher. This time she spoke in her creepy errie voice "Hello"
I was to frightned to speak,I just stared at her. "What's your name sweety",the ghostly figure standing before me asked. "Like hell I'd tell you",I responded trying to hide my fear. "Come on you know you can me",she coaxed. "NO",I screamed. "YES",she said. "NO" "YES" "NO" YES" "NO" "YES" "NO" "YES"
"LEAVE ME ALONE DAMN IT",I demanded. "Am I scaring you",she asked
"No....",I lied. "Very good,I'll be on my way then",she said as she magically diasappered. I had to talk to someone about this. But who? I couldn't talk to Crow,he'd just say I'm crazy. But then who could I call. I pondered this for a few
minutes. Then I knew exactly who to call,I knew who wouldn't judge me. I whipped out my cell phone and diled the number. It rang a couple of times before picking up. "Hello?" "Marlee",I said "I need to tell you something..."
"But.....But",I started. "SYBIL",my brother growled flashing me the death glare
unable to speak,I just quieted right down. And with that my brother walked out the door,closing it behind him. As soon as the door clicked shut,my room began to shake wildly. What the hell,I thought to myself,and suddenly she was back.... Muther Natcher. This time she spoke in her creepy errie voice "Hello"
I was to frightned to speak,I just stared at her. "What's your name sweety",the ghostly figure standing before me asked. "Like hell I'd tell you",I responded trying to hide my fear. "Come on you know you can me",she coaxed. "NO",I screamed. "YES",she said. "NO" "YES" "NO" YES" "NO" "YES" "NO" "YES"
"LEAVE ME ALONE DAMN IT",I demanded. "Am I scaring you",she asked
"No....",I lied. "Very good,I'll be on my way then",she said as she magically diasappered. I had to talk to someone about this. But who? I couldn't talk to Crow,he'd just say I'm crazy. But then who could I call. I pondered this for a few
minutes. Then I knew exactly who to call,I knew who wouldn't judge me. I whipped out my cell phone and diled the number. It rang a couple of times before picking up. "Hello?" "Marlee",I said "I need to tell you something..."
6 Comments
I love it. I love the vivacious vocabulary you used. And I love the plot between the brother and the Sister.
Thanks :)
its so awesome it makes you think and wonder about whats going to happen next its really a great peice of work
Awesome.
cool! i remember this story... you haven't done a chapter in forever! But now you did, so yayyy! :D
aWesomE