My poem (bad lol)

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Chapter 1

never good enough for you

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So you say you're going to be there so you say you do Care but everytime I turn to you, you seem to disappear

I guess I'm not good enough for a place in your heart well guess what your the reason mines falling apart

I tell you to take your time find what you want but inside I'm screaming choose me for once

You've given me enough pain why don't you love me too I try to do everything you ask and yell me to

I'm tired and beaten down by my own suicidal hate I guess this loneliness is my only optional fate

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Movingon 03-21-2011 at 9:50 PM 0 0
So good!
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sk8erpoet 03-21-2011 at 9:51 PM 0 0
its awesome
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Michelle_Sykes_Gaskarth 03-21-2011 at 9:51 PM 0 0
awww.thats sad,but really good
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The_Girl_From_Your_Dreams 03-21-2011 at 9:51 PM 0 0
This is freaking awesome:)
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YouMakeMeWannaDie 03-21-2011 at 9:52 PM 0 0
Its amazing but sad
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Fantasy_Dutchess 03-21-2011 at 9:53 PM 0 0
I like this, I really feel the emotion
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susannacates 03-21-2011 at 10:05 PM 0 0
that is better than mine and mine is horrable!!
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iThinkYurSexy_C8 03-22-2011 at 8:14 AM 0 0
This is awesome :)
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iRoos 03-22-2011 at 12:21 PM 0 0
i disagree with the title
its not bad
its really good!
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Special 03-22-2011 at 2:12 PM 0 0
*hugs* It's ok, Aaron.
Also, you're an awesome poet :)