Poems
Just poems... Read if you want.
Everything has gone amiss,
My life has changed,
My dreams have fade,
I stare solely into blackness,
The moon has changed,
The stars have fade,
I'm running to the only light,
It calls to me,
It taunts its glee,
I fall and cry as I fight,
My eyes teary,
I know no glee,
I stare behind my rigid path,
Ghosts that follow,
All my sorrow,
I stare into my demon's rath,
It's heart so hollow,
Brings no tomorrow,
I get back up and break back down,
I fear my death,
To lose my breath,
I remember my haunting town,
Lust and meth,
Odoured blood and sweat,
Nothing good remains in me,
I have no hope,
I cannot cope,
I'm my own demon, can't you see?
My heart I scope,
I moan and mope,
My life remains and fall apart,
It's my time,
What's yours is mine,
You've broken this; my stilted heart,
You've crossed the line,
My love is fine,
You're the reason I am this way,
Haunted, taunted,
My dreams ever flaunted,
You're the enemy, and you must pay,
Your face has daunted,
I've got it sorted,
I keep running to your adobe,
To take your life,
Upon this knife,
I break through and catch your robe,
To wrong this right,
You'll die this night,
I raise my hand into the air,
I hear you scream,
I smile and teem,
And lower it without a care,
Into eternal dreams,
You're hell has freezed,
Im covered by your blood and sin,
I regret it not,
My vengence saught,
My demon, he has come in,
It's anger hot,
It's fight is faught,
I run back out ur open door,
Im dripping wet,
Its not over yet,
Death by heartbreak, tis not a chore,
You shouldn't have let,
In this pet,
I used to love you, I used to be blind,
You're kindness taken,
To be raked in,
But now I see your filth and lies,
Its my new win,
Your hate laid in,
I escape in the calming night,
It whispers kindly,
Right beside me,
I have no use of unused light,
My demon, yes he's,
My one and only,
To serve and praise his command,
Anything,
To hear him ring,
This is HIS only land,
I hear him sing,
My only king.
My life has changed,
My dreams have fade,
I stare solely into blackness,
The moon has changed,
The stars have fade,
I'm running to the only light,
It calls to me,
It taunts its glee,
I fall and cry as I fight,
My eyes teary,
I know no glee,
I stare behind my rigid path,
Ghosts that follow,
All my sorrow,
I stare into my demon's rath,
It's heart so hollow,
Brings no tomorrow,
I get back up and break back down,
I fear my death,
To lose my breath,
I remember my haunting town,
Lust and meth,
Odoured blood and sweat,
Nothing good remains in me,
I have no hope,
I cannot cope,
I'm my own demon, can't you see?
My heart I scope,
I moan and mope,
My life remains and fall apart,
It's my time,
What's yours is mine,
You've broken this; my stilted heart,
You've crossed the line,
My love is fine,
You're the reason I am this way,
Haunted, taunted,
My dreams ever flaunted,
You're the enemy, and you must pay,
Your face has daunted,
I've got it sorted,
I keep running to your adobe,
To take your life,
Upon this knife,
I break through and catch your robe,
To wrong this right,
You'll die this night,
I raise my hand into the air,
I hear you scream,
I smile and teem,
And lower it without a care,
Into eternal dreams,
You're hell has freezed,
Im covered by your blood and sin,
I regret it not,
My vengence saught,
My demon, he has come in,
It's anger hot,
It's fight is faught,
I run back out ur open door,
Im dripping wet,
Its not over yet,
Death by heartbreak, tis not a chore,
You shouldn't have let,
In this pet,
I used to love you, I used to be blind,
You're kindness taken,
To be raked in,
But now I see your filth and lies,
Its my new win,
Your hate laid in,
I escape in the calming night,
It whispers kindly,
Right beside me,
I have no use of unused light,
My demon, yes he's,
My one and only,
To serve and praise his command,
Anything,
To hear him ring,
This is HIS only land,
I hear him sing,
My only king.
20 Comments
I loved it!!
Thanks! ^_^
very nice :D heehee
5 stars :) :)
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!!
Interesting, although I must admit, it had been much better than expected. Resume with the typing and i'll be more than satisfied to continue with the reading. I am quite delighted with poems.
This poem= Awesome.
I am jubilant to capitulate your solicitation. ^_^
Nobody seems to be reading these anymore, so, Imma gonna wrap it up unless I get comments. :(
I just read the first one.
While it's dark, and a bit morbid, it's a good poem, actually worth reading! I had thought to give up on poems on Quibblo, since it's less enjoyable than attempting to read the "stories" people post on here....but this is good so far. I don't know about the death and demons, but hey.
What is What is AWESOME!!
You don't deserve to die, and I'm glad that as the poem progresses you seem to realize that. Awesome writing.
Huh, "Adam" was even better than I expected it to be....seriously good writing skills you have!
But Oblivious was SO different from the others. I don't know that I like that one. It sounds very Twilight....which isn't good in my book. But I've never loved someone outside my family, obv., so I wouldn't really know. Again and again I say: Good poems, great writing!
Lawlz, Thank you for your amazing feedback! :) I made "Oblivion" when I was really tired, its more of a draft. ^_^ And again, thank you!
Your welcome for the comments...I'm a writer on several sites, and I know how wonderful it is to get loads of comments/feedback, especially when they review each chapter!
"Friend" is alright, but I would suggest not having a comma after every line. There are a few lines that are continuing the line from above it, so no comma is really necessary, and breaks both the flow of the poem, and the way it looks. Hope you keep writing! I added this to my favourites, and I'll check often for updates!!
Dear Rose is good, and I just went through that with my friend (though it was just us, no guy involved or anything), so definitely speaks to me!
And hey, I think you mean her soul is foul not fowl. Fowl is a bird!
XD
"Tree" is great but aren't you afraid of trees
Yeeeeeerr.... What has that got to do with the poem? I used to be petrified of spiders, but I never wanted to harm them, in fact, i rebuked any violence brought upon them!