shmur shmur shmur(poem with a weird and random name)
Your relentless.
Your merciless glare you cast upon me.
With eyes that shine brighter then god himself.
With each glance my mood lightens.
I feel as if im floating on air.
Or soaring through the starry, moonlit night sky.
With no care in the world.
Only you on my mind.
You have a smile that could light a room.
And hair that flows like the ocean breeze.
Your everything to me.
Without you my life would have no meaning.
Your always there when I need you.
Even with your own problems.
You still help me.
I couldnt have asked for anything better.
Your frail life means the world to me.
Ill always be here for you just like you were for me.
I love you.
Your merciless glare you cast upon me.
With eyes that shine brighter then god himself.
With each glance my mood lightens.
I feel as if im floating on air.
Or soaring through the starry, moonlit night sky.
With no care in the world.
Only you on my mind.
You have a smile that could light a room.
And hair that flows like the ocean breeze.
Your everything to me.
Without you my life would have no meaning.
Your always there when I need you.
Even with your own problems.
You still help me.
I couldnt have asked for anything better.
Your frail life means the world to me.
Ill always be here for you just like you were for me.
I love you.
8 Comments
it's YOU'RE relentless...learn proper grammar before doing a poem *facepalm*
didn't even read cause you can't spell
*thumb down* actually.............100 thumbs down!!!
kthxbai.
yeaaaah if you want to write do it well.... i mean come on
-_- asswipes...i dont put you're because im to lazy not because i dont know proper grammar you d|ckheads
go cry in your 13 years corner zzzz
dont mind them hunny, i love it. :)
it was a great poem(:
i rated 5 stars
i give your poem a 1000 thumbs up!! i luv it!! its a VERY gud poem and dnt listen 2 those
who dnt think its gud!!
just blank them
it doesnt matter :)
its really good xx