Wonderful Wonders in Wonderland
I have to make a list poem for English, would you guys give me some advise about this poem? Yes it is about Alice in Wonderland. Please tell me if it's good or not, or if you have any suggestions about it!
Wonderful wonders fill Wonderland
But do not be fool by it's innocent demeanor
Darkness lurks around every corner
This is the place where cats have grins
Hatters are mad
And rabbits have pocket watches
This is the place where a Red Queen reigns
The Bandersnacth can get you
And the Jabowocky is the most feared creature
Wonderland is a place full of good and evil
Is where the girl who chased the rabbit drank the potion and ate the cake has visited
Down, down, down the rabbit hole she went
To save her friends and the place she loves so dear
To face her fears and become their champion
The wonderful wonders in Wonderland will mess with your mind
Are you ready to go?
But do not be fool by it's innocent demeanor
Darkness lurks around every corner
This is the place where cats have grins
Hatters are mad
And rabbits have pocket watches
This is the place where a Red Queen reigns
The Bandersnacth can get you
And the Jabowocky is the most feared creature
Wonderland is a place full of good and evil
Is where the girl who chased the rabbit drank the potion and ate the cake has visited
Down, down, down the rabbit hole she went
To save her friends and the place she loves so dear
To face her fears and become their champion
The wonderful wonders in Wonderland will mess with your mind
Are you ready to go?
1 Comment
This is really good. :)