A Single Breath of Fire
Life in Brey is hard for Katgeilia (Kat) Darsen. Being a Keeper of two opposite Gates is even harder, especially with no one to train her how to contol them. When she meets Ash Sear, she is sure there is something weird going on. Both sent on the same mission, to retrieve the Lost Key, Kat and Ash become friends. That's when Kat learns the ultimate secret.
" Keep away from him." " Don't look at him." " Why do they allow him in the city at all?" " He's dangerous." " Don't touch him."
"He's a monster."
The words swirled through the night.
In the middle of Floredda, a huge city on the west coast of Brey, almost all the people had gathered. Between four armed knights stood a little boy, not over the age of four. His flaming red hair was soaked, his small eyes searching for anyway to escape what he knew was to come.
Upon hearing the last phrase from the one friend he thought he had, tears of sorrow started uncontrollably rolling down his cheeks. His sobbing was so sorrowful, that the people mistook the wail for something evil.
" He is calling upon the spirits!" " Flee!" " Execution." " Evil will come upon the city if we let this go on!"
That was the moment when something snapped inside the boy. The weeping ceased immediately, the sadness replace thoroughly by uncontrolled anger.
That was the night when Floredda disappeared from the face of the planet.
That was the night when Floredda became nothing more than piles upon piles of ashes.
All this came to be because of a single breath of fire.
"He's a monster."
The words swirled through the night.
In the middle of Floredda, a huge city on the west coast of Brey, almost all the people had gathered. Between four armed knights stood a little boy, not over the age of four. His flaming red hair was soaked, his small eyes searching for anyway to escape what he knew was to come.
Upon hearing the last phrase from the one friend he thought he had, tears of sorrow started uncontrollably rolling down his cheeks. His sobbing was so sorrowful, that the people mistook the wail for something evil.
" He is calling upon the spirits!" " Flee!" " Execution." " Evil will come upon the city if we let this go on!"
That was the moment when something snapped inside the boy. The weeping ceased immediately, the sadness replace thoroughly by uncontrolled anger.
That was the night when Floredda disappeared from the face of the planet.
That was the night when Floredda became nothing more than piles upon piles of ashes.
All this came to be because of a single breath of fire.
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I love this! I can relate to the "other self" that she has, as I talk to myself a lot...