Poems
Just some poems I wrote. You don't have to read if you don't want to, can't force you, but if you do, could you tell me what you think? Please, and thank you ^.^
I must be pathetic.
At night, when I just feel like crying,
I create a person.
A person who actually cares,
Who listens to me,
Who I tell everything.
But when I open my puffy red eyes,
I think "Wow, I'm really pathetic,
There'll never be someone like that!"
But then I go back to not caring
And make him exist again.
So what you think? Criticism is welcomed.
At night, when I just feel like crying,
I create a person.
A person who actually cares,
Who listens to me,
Who I tell everything.
But when I open my puffy red eyes,
I think "Wow, I'm really pathetic,
There'll never be someone like that!"
But then I go back to not caring
And make him exist again.
So what you think? Criticism is welcomed.
16 Comments
This is so emotional. I feel like this all the time, I can totally relate to it. :) Awesome poem.
Thanks, it's good to know I'm not the only one and thanks X)
I empathise. When I'm upset I tell myself to suck it up, but I always end up crying. :/ I love ur poem. :)
Thanks X) and if you ever need someone to talk to I'm a good listener and I'll help if I can
that was nice hope you find that person wink wink
lol thanks ^.^
very well written good job
thank you X)
thats really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you very much!!!!!!!! 8)
very good job :) you should be a pro ;)
Thank you, that made me so happy you said that ^-^
both of these are really good. like everyone learns eventually most people do not value your trust and would gladly betray it, but there are those few you can trust. and also though it usually seems noone cares i assure you someone does.
Thank you, and I know it is a sad reality for a lot of people
I like it and i care ^_^
thanks and that's good to know ^-^